I usually won't admit it, but you guys totally got me. I just started and finished the last update so far tonight, and I was like shocked when I read what Jack had told Zack. I mean usually I always guess those types of things in movies etc, but you guys totally caught me off guard. ANYWAY, so I love this story so much! very original :)
Though the first chapter was funny, her reaction wasn't really that realistic. And how she couldn't see him, but then she could. And she also went through him, but then again, he was able to pull a 'fuzzy' from her hair.
Second Chapter; I laughed my butt off when I read "I stopped watching Dragon Tales when I turned eight." I haven't watched that show in forever! Good stuff, man.
But yeah, I've only read those two chapters. Reading the rest now. ^_^
Okay. I haven't checked any of my subscriptions in like a month because the stupid internet was being...well, you know, stupid and my dad turned off the internet on my phone because i was "misusing it" (whatever) so it just magically started to function today and i sign on to read my favorite story and THIS happens!!!!!! SHE'S SCHIZOPHRENIC!! WHHAAAAATTTT!! I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS JUST BY SOME MIRACLE HE WAS COMING BACK TO LIFE!!!! BUT NOOOOOOO! YOU JUST HAD TO TWIST IT AROUND DIDN'T YOU?? .....But i still love it! :) UPDATE SOOONNNNN!!!
I did not see any of this coming. haha. I actually thought she was really seeing themm. Dammit, i knew it you would twist it. lol. (: I love the story thoughhh. <3