July 12th, 2011 at 08:45pm
I loved the update! They're so freaking adorable together! <3
I can't believe Brian is 30...so crazy!
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July 9th, 2011 at 05:09am
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Muy buenoJuly 8th, 2011 at 10:22pm
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so worth the wait! I can't wait till you update again! :)July 8th, 2011 at 07:34pm
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loved itJuly 8th, 2011 at 07:04pm
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This story is a-fucking-mazing. I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep it up! :)
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Chapter 15: Awwwwwwww that was so cute! They are so into each other and they don't even know it ;)
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i still absolutely adore this story!!!! i can't wait for more! they're too cute.July 8th, 2011 at 08:33am
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Yay for the update. I totally loved it. Now, for all other updates you need to just have faith in your writing. I know you've been told a million times over, but I must say it again just for good measure. Have faith in what you write and don't write for your readers, write because it makes you feel good. Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely. Very good. The ending wasn't all that bad. I thought it was pretty good.July 8th, 2011 at 08:14am
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YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!July 8th, 2011 at 07:26am -
you need to update this soonn!!!April 14th, 2011 at 02:21am
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What's happening to this story? I'd love to read more...April 8th, 2011 at 04:26pm
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I am in love with this story, it's the only story that I have gotten really attached too and it read all in a matter of two days since the chapters are so long. The first story that I don't mind long chapters because all of it was really good. Alana's character is just a sweetheart and her doubtful mind is so cute and the way Brian is with her, changing from asshole to sweetheart is really something. I hope we get to see what happens next. Laney's character reminds me so much of myself since I'm the fighter in my group as well. I hit the boys that are assholes to other girls or people in general. Their nicknames are no exception, Dimplekins, Superman, Sunshine all of them are just so adorable. :)March 28th, 2011 at 04:54am
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i found this story today and ive just been sitting here reading it all day. i just finished chapter 14 and it is 6:08am. i feel like a rebel lol. yeah so i just wanted to say your an amazing writer and cant wait till you update again. this has got to be one of my favourite stories :DJanuary 27th, 2011 at 08:09pm
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i love this story, and you always make up for long pauses between updats with good long chapters.
can't wait for the next one though!January 10th, 2011 at 09:13pm -
*New Reader!*
I really like this story. The plot is amazing and very original.
I hope you update soon,January 8th, 2011 at 04:46am -
Ohmygod! Ohmygod! Ohmygod! He kisses her, right?! Like, the right way! I hope so. I really, really do. You can tell he likes her. A lot. And she just crushes him every time she says something relating to her never dating him and stuff.January 7th, 2011 at 06:23am
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loved itJanuary 7th, 2011 at 12:09am
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well I do love long chappies and OMG!!!January 6th, 2011 at 07:10am
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I can't believe you left it there! lol
Loved the update...although her comment about not dating Brian if he was the last guy on Earth was kind of harsh! Hopefully they both change their opinions about each other soon! They're really cute together! <3January 6th, 2011 at 02:24am
Loved the update, it's nice to see them trying to be friends and all... Can't wait for more :)