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Oh my god, I can't believe that the next chapter is the last one.
I just read the whole story and I can't wait for there to be more.

Still slightly histrionic, I said “Well what ef they don’t get better?”

“Then I swear that we’ll go on an indefinite holiday.”

I couldn’t help but smile. Even if things between Tom and I were slightly strained due to some long untold bit of information, he was still the best friend I ever had and ever would have. Showing my affection for him, I leaned over and laid my head on his shoulder. I’d never met anyone so perfect.

awh tom. ach. all this stuff going on both years. poor lass.

I looked down at my outfit, forgetting that I still had stitches in my forehead and a cast on my arm. “I thought I looked kinda cute,” I frowned. I’d been very particular with my choice of attire, skipping the typical black t-shirt and opting for a generally Gracie approved striped shirt.
-haha

“I didn’t invite yeh.”
I released him, stepping away and allowing him to hold his own weight. “Didn’t know I needed a personal invitation from Oli Sykes to come.”
-don't think many people would be at concerts thhen. ha

He grasped my hand a little tighter and said “I promise yeh that things will get better. Maybe not right now but it’ll happen.”

Still slightly histrionic, I said “Well what ef they don’t get better?”

“Then I swear that we’ll go on an indefinite holiday.”

That was just so sweet... I love how 2009 Savannah is finally honest with herself and doesn't lie to herself. I don't think she's truly running away entirely. I think she's starting to find herself still and I don't think there's any shame in that. I was saddened when she broke up with Peter, but she was also honest about where her head was and her heart and I don't think anyone could ask for more. I also think Tom was lovely for just being there and holding her hand (metaphorically).

2005 Oliver broke my heart. He just gave up, and even though it had something to do with Tom, he shouldn't have settled for less. I cried like I always do. Gosh, I wish I could do this chapter more justice and say something truly amazing about it, but these were the things I loved about it. I'm sad this story is coming to an end, it's just that addictive and well-written. If only good things could never come to an end... =)

Nooooo!!! This was the 2nd last chapter? You know that this is my 2nd fav Oli story...and I only ever liked two..ever!

I cannot believe that Oli actually let himself be pushed away from Anna, that he didn't fight for her...that he didn't fall to his knees and actually told his younger sibling "I really do love her"...instead he gave in way too easy and acted as suespected: he just left one chicl for another...as was always routine. That made me sad.
Her breaking up with Peter made me sad, too! He seemed like such a great, suited guy for her. But him being a dad, having his life kinda all worked out...maybe she just wasn't ready for that to begin with. The fact that she slept with Oli again, and that sher's not all over him at all comes only secondary in my opinion.
And Tom...dear, beloved Tom! He'd deserve so much to be more than just the best friend. It's obvious once more, that there are not only platonic feelings in it for him. Gods, I just wanna hug him and tell him that one day, he'll get what he deserves!
What will she do? Will she go back to uni? Or will she stay? Or will she run off after all...just leave ve everything/ everyone 'poisonous' behind? Thanks so much for this update love, it was much needed!

Nooooooo!
I don't want it to be over :'(
Awesome chapter though. Mhmm.

Aw, I really loved this story.
I'm going to miss it.

I can already feel the tears coming.
And I got a little watery eyed in the 2005 part towards the end.
It was horrid.
D:
But I'm looking forward to the next update.

I think in the last sentence it should be 'met' not 'meant.'

This story is so great, I don't want it to end!!
I'm ready to cry, so bring on the finale por favor.

You're gonna make me cry?
Really?
Fuck. >.<

I DON'T WANT THIS TO END. :'(
so sad that it's ending. i can't wait til the next chapter, but in a way i can, cause i don't want it to end. but it's okay, i can deal. haha.
this story is the most beautiful, because i can relate so much to Tom and Sav's relationship, and it's refreshing. I also love that she's finally realizing that she doesn't want to do law anymore, that everyone had told her and she's finally realizing for herself. argh i can't wait for the next chapter, i'll have the box of tissues waiting. :) haha.
you are a really great writer. love this story.

ugghh. don't want this to end at all.
this part already made me a bit misty, so i can only imagine what the next one will do to me.

My god, I am so happy I read this story. I feel like I could go on forever about what I love about it but I'll keep it simple: everything about this story is perfect. It's the best story on this site, hands down.

Holy shit.
I just found this and read the whole thing nonstop.
Seriously one on the best stories I've ever read.

Update soon? <333

i love how you update a few days before my birthdayyy

I hope you know you had me crying through the 2005 part. Because it shouldn't be that hard for them. I hate how much they think they can never love each other when it's so blatantly obvious that they already do. I hate how she can't see that it's real. And I hate how difficult everything is.

I just want her to let him love her like he can. And I want him to get past all that he's "done to her" and realize she's better with him because he gives her something no one else does: real love.

get it! i absolutely loved this but that's no surprise. the twisted relationship she has with oli, and the slightly complicated one she had/has with tom and the way he defended her in his mind, i could go on and on but damn, so good.

OhMyLord.
The last chapter was ah-mazing. 2005 and 2009 was...wow. Tom decking Oli cause he admitted that he loved Sav. And Oli snuggling up to Sav and feeling so wrong about it, was amazing. The way you captured their feelings were just so real, I nearly cried. Sometimes I feel like I am Sav and living this with the way you have written this. I am not sure if I am angry or just sad that Tom hadn't told Sav this all earlier, or even Oli. I wish Oli told Sav he loved her, and still does. I love how this is all coming together, slowly. Which means it'll be over soon, oh I can't think of that right now! But I can't wait til the next update! I really adore this story <3
Sorry for mistakes; on my phone again. And sorry for the jumpy comment, thoughts were just jumping around and I wrote what I was thinking at the time. :s

that was sweet of oliver :)
and I'm kinda proud of tom for decking his brother, even though he didn't deserve it..in a way :D

I wish there were more sam carter stories, too, or at least one...He's amazing as well as the rest of architects :)