Suspicious Minds - Comments

I cannot believe it's over already...
It was such an awesome story, really... With 2 very special original characters, Lola & Emma.
I'm gonna miss this story, you girls did an amazing job writing it :)
And nuuba, thks for mentionning me in the chapter :)
Thank you for sharing this story with us <3

Awww, I'm gonna miss your stories!

Now theres one thing left for me to do....read suspicious minds all over again!! *clicks on chapter 1*

It's gonna be a looooong night...

love it!

Awe I can't believe that Lola and Matt are going to have a baby. That's so sweet.
I'm glad that the court trial is all gone now and Lola can move on happily with Matt now.
Amazing chapter.

loved the last two updates!
I'm sad this is coming to an end :(
I'm glad Matt and Lola are having a baby!!

so she's gonna be pregnant and we don't get to see how her pregnancy hormones affect everyone?! sad times haha

i'm so sad to this story go. it was amazing!

<3

I remember Lola at the early chapters and she gave the idea of a snob chick that was after Matt and would do anything to get him even if she hurt someone in the process....but now she's grown so much!!

I never actually hated Lola...I did disliked her at first but only from Emma's POV...because from Lola's POV I could read the thoughts behind the actions and that was enough to think that what she did,she did it only because she was hurt in the past.

Emma grew as well...I'm a living proof that staying away from your home and long-life friends can change you as a person..and she did that! She managed to open up to people and actually stand up to Matt..the flaming ball as I call him:P

I managed not to cry at the end of your chapter because I knew that there's another one left...I'll keep the tissues near me for the following:p

I wrote this comment on Jules profile but I thought that it belonged here as well :)

LOVE IT!

"Having his parents suddenly turning their cold shoulder on me was hard on Matt, and I could feel a rift between us come apparent"
damn:(

"[..] not believing that the guys would actually start up any shit in a court house[....] been that stupid."
and also, the guy took a bullet for their girls...that was more than enough I think

"cause I want to drive into LA for the next part of George's trial."
COME OOOOOONNNNN!!!!
LET IT FCKING BE!!! $%#$%#$%$#

"put the past behind me like anyone in my situation would do, or to get my stuff and leave."
that was a pretty clear choise to makeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! uuuuuurgggg
wanna kick her ass!!!

....ok past this...I think she just left because she doesnt like taking sht like this

Matt could agree with her..but go with her. I mean they were going to court, it would be safe! But since he's an over-dramatic fool they cant help but fight over this. LoLa packing her bags, Matt running after her like a flaming ball. That's Matt and Lola though :)

"His voice was low and dangerous, and for some sick reason it didn't repulse me, but made me look at his lips very closely, wanting to kiss him so bad right now. "
yep..Matt and Lola alright!

"“Are you sure about this babe? Cause once I start, I am not gonna stop until I am done with you, leaving no question as to who wears the pants in this relationship.”"
mmm...dont just love "manly" men?
...I feel so sorry for Gera!! hahahah

"“What's going on Lola...you have that look on your face. This...this wasn't break-up sex, was it? Fuck, I was not serious when I said-”
“I'm pregnant!”"
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
:D:D:D:D
SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

"“But...you're on the pill. How-”"
oh come on!!! hug her you stupid stupid man!!

"How...how far along are we?”"
i love this. i loved that he used plural..

"I got a reaction from him. A smile. A big, dimple-filled smile before he engulfed me in his arms, pulling me tight against his body,"
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I'm smiling like the joker here;p

"but Matt slapped my hand away and took the cup holder from Gera, placing it on the coffee table."
lol
He's gonna terrorize her! hahhaha
I hope the baby is a boy cuz if is a girl...oh damn:P

"
I looked up at him, remembering all the drama from the last tour we had been on,"
damn...when I think about how this story started...feels like forever! <3

"It's my sad duty to bid you farewell.
This is the very last of my beloved Lola's endeavors"
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :(((((((((((((((
am gonna cry!!!

"She's a very classy lady and deserves only the best(which is exactly why I don't approve of Synyster Gates as her idol)"
hahaha
Sorry Jules! I'm with Nuuba on this one!;p

I cannot believe I just read Lolas final chapter...damn.. ;/

this story is by far my favorite I've ever read!

P.S. let me know about that thing we've talked on FB.....I couldn't be any more cryptic! lol!!

....damn I miss this story already:/

xxxx
...cya after Emmas final chapter!

I can't believe its the end!!!! I'm so happy they're gonna have a baby!
I wish we could read how the pregnancy turns out, and what the baby would be!
You two did an AMAZING FUCKING job on this story!!!

nice ending

*sniffles* sadness! lastish.. chapter jsut one last one from nuuba and its finished NOOOO lmao jsut kidding I loved it and i shall be looking forword to some jimmers!

I don't want this story to end!!!

Shit my last comment was long!

I know you said to give Lola some love, but to say I don't like her is a understatement. Is there just me who thought that Matt should have dumped her arse ages ago? I can't help but feel that since getting together with Matt she's been quite selfish. As Padge said: 'What Lola Wants, Lola Gets'. Poor Emma has been pushed aside for Princess Lola on many occations, and left being thought of as the villan. Yeah I know what you must be thinking, "Get a grip woman, it's a Fan-Fic for crying out loud", but you really pulled me in, and I felt the need to protect Emma through-out the whole of the story. I'm really gonna miss this when its finished, it's one of the best stories I've read. Thank you for giving me something to read in my spare time, and putting up with the little rant above ^. Good luck with future projects ;D

Awh! *tear* I loved it! I loved every single part of it! :D
I wish there were more. One of my favorite stories for sure!

I love this story so freaking much.
-Much Appreciation From Me-
You guys have epic writing skills. xD
<3

Wow, for a minute there I though that Emma or Lola were goners. I'm so glad that Jorel stood up to George and protected Emma it shows that he really cares about her.
Amazing update. :)

i FINALLY managed to get myself caught up. somehow I managed to miss the last 6 or so chapters (what have i been doing with my life? haha)

and it was probably not the best idea to read them all in the living room in my apartment cause my roommates kept giving me funny likes at my reactions haha

<3

I think you should post your stuff on here whether it's fanfiction or not. You're still a very good writer, and I LOVE reading your stuff. I have to admit, your work tends to influence my own, not ideas, but the way you write. All the stories I read kinda do that. But please don't give up posting stuff! :[

That would make me sad..