Suspicious Minds - Comments

really great! is it over already though?

awsome!

wait that was the last chapter? no! well, i jst like 2 tell u tht ur story was one of my favorite stories out there:)

noooo!!!!!! You're gonna stop writing on mibba??!!??!?! GRAWRRRR!!! Best add me on myspace or somethin Nuubs I'm telling you , i dont twitter or formspring.. or facebook LMAO myspace is my addiction <333333333 LOL so add me!!! and I LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA LOVES IT<33333333

"Apparently I owed this to Jay…"
pfffff

"The main thing was that Jorel had kept his promise to try and keep George away for the evening"
thankfully!!

ok..talked too soon:S

"He pushed me face first against the corner to the hallway, bending my left arm behind my back. "
o_O

phewwwwwwwwwwwwww

"the boy obviously had such an ugly face that only a mother could love him"
lmao!!

"He stopped and blinked surprised, his eyes staring down to the chair."
why do I think he was going to kiss her? :S

"His eyes caught fire, “You fucking do know me and what I do and don’t do!”"
he's kinda right about that. However, sometimes, no matter how well we know someone, when we face them in a different place, a different "enviroment", our mind plays a weird trick, making us believe something other that the truth. Meaning that just because of the drama that surrounded the whole meating she thought he would hurt her..

"“Have you lost weight?” I wrinkles my nose perplexed."
lmao!

"“Your dick is bigger if you wanted to hear that.”"
hahahahahaha
....I still want Brian! :Pp

..oh I lovve the dramaaaaaa

"And then I heard it. A gunshot."
o_O

"only to be stopped by a smoking gun barrel suddenly being pointed towards my throat…"
this is turning too dramatic...

" He had just fired a gun at me. Possibly had been aiming at my head. He wanted me dead, and this time he was not joking."
$#%#%$#^$#^$@^@# SHE FINALLY GOT IT!!!!!! THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

urrrhggggg

holy sht...why do I have a bad feeling about J here?

"Jorel was laying on the dirty carpet "
uuuaaaaaaaaa I KNEW ITTTTTTT :(((

"..there are many reasons to smile right now babe.""
sure thing! :}

loved it..as always...it didn't pass my "overdramatic" line:P

I'm gonna interrogate you personally dear F.!!!

The other day, I was thinking the weekend I spend catching up with this story..the events...and where we end up..it's an amazing journey! I'm not thinking about the end. I'll only think about it when it's here:)

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wow, you answered my question... with a real long explenation I'm honored xp
Just a few more questions actually and I don't feel like putiing them up on form spring,

1. I get that you're freaked out by fanfiction I have the same issue but could we, maybe expect an original, eventually after a long break, from you? 'Cause whatever it is I like you're writing and I think it would be nice to read something different from you without the guidance and limitations of fanfiction.

2. Will you still be on mibba? What I'm actually asking , can I still bother you with questions on here or do you want a clean cut and shit?xp

Maybe this isn't the right place for this...but I already typed it up here so... people will just have to deal.

about the chapter, well it was intense, but what happens to Jay now? I mean they just left him in there poor dude! Yeah now emma's back together with Brian I can feel sorry for him xp

Lola is a strange character, I thought I liked her by now and I do but in this chapter I've had a couple of issues with her... well the fact I can think of her as a person shows good writing I guess xp

It does suck that my 2 favorite HU guys are sicko's, shame. Well Jay needs to get out of there and george needs to rot in jail. But I'm guessing that's going to happen.

loved it!
I really cant wait to see what's gonna happen!

I love having Matt and Brian Pov. It's nice to know how they feel about the situation.
I'm glad that Matt and Emma were able to make up even if started out violent at first. I bet the house was a mess after those two were done with it. lol

I hope that things dont go too bad when Lola and Emma go visit Jorel.
Amazing update. I can't wait for the next one to see what happens next. :)

That was definitely a hilarious chapter, you made them sound like actual MEN and not stupid faggot pussies like most fanfic writers end up making them sound like.

"who the fuck did that douche think he was?"
indeed!

"She buried her face into my bare chest and inhaled deeply. I couldn’t help but wrap my arms around her and pull her even closer to me."
*siiiiiiiiiighh*

"I’m with Lola, what could go wrong?”
Everything."

hahaha trueeee:p

"I scoffed, “Out of the fucking car. Now.”"
lmao! you really thought he would give in?? haha;p

okay I gotta stop comenting this like am talking to Emma or Lola :p

"had wished they would’ve simply just collapsed into each other’s embraces and promised never to hate each other again"
well that makes two of us!

"“Forgiven? Me?!” "
buahahaha!! I knew she would freak out;p

"I was certain that Johnny and Zacky were watching Freckles the wrong way."
lol what a possessive phyco! [God I love those men!]

Im proud of Zack for assuring Matty that he has his back no matter what.

"“any other news that needs to be announced? Someone gotten back together or found someone new?”"
YEAAAAAHHH!!!

"
“Then you don’t probably mind if I tell the guys about how I face-fucked her the other day. It was her first time; she loved every second of it…”"
is he suicidal?!?!?!

"it was like my mouth had a mind of its own"
apparently!!! suicidal man!! ...lol...this is so fcking amusing!!!;]

"“better get used to the thought that we’re going to be part of the same big family! For real; I’m going to marry your sister!” "
i.just.died!

"“Well speaking as a completely objective third-party outsider with absolutely no personal interest in the manner, I’m convinced you two would fit together.”"
lmao!!!! the way he put it...fcking awesome!!;p

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"“Bullet For My Valentine, huh? This my dear, looks like you have gone soft, and you love me and wanna show the damn world that you're mine forever. Cause that is what tattoos are you know: forever.”"
hihihi xD

"Her being with Haner is a minor inconvenience"
lmao! the sacrifises a man has to do huh?:p

"“Whatever. I know I can get her to have me shag her in the bathroom...you just watch me!”"
su.i.ci.dal!

"“I have a bad feeling about this..."
so am I :/

I loved the guys-POV chapter...it was different and very interesting! I'll very very sad when this is over...its my fave part of the weekend :(

Btw sorry for taking so long to comment but Im back home xD
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Oh boy... at least they kinda made up

I really like how you put Matt's and Brian's POV into the story. I think you should do that more often it's nice to read what they are thinking. This was one hell of an update, I think one of my favorite through the whole story. Can't wait to read more!

are you guys shitting me?
you leave the story on a note of doom and tell us we'll have to wait a couple of weeks vor the next chapter? psh

that very...not nice!
wow what a burn oh well, hope you get out of your block or whatever it is!

Noo two more chapters? so not cool. haha.
this chapter made me laugh. Matt's master plan was pretty good, don't think I would have ever figured that out. :)
can't wait for thee next chapter!

I think Matt got off a little easy. -__-
but I loved this chapter!!!!
Brian's hilarious.
It's funny when he eggs on Matt. Lol
so can't wait til the next chapter!!!!

As much as I do love this story, I'm excited for it to end.
I wanna see how it all turns out! :D

*Cackles* I loved it! OMG it was FUNNYYYYYY like seriously GREAT hhahhahahahaha i cant wait to read moe and por matt gets cock blocked LMAO always great to see that

very curious to see what's gonna happen when Emma talks to Jorel
cant wait to see how Matt likes Lola's tattoo!
looking forward to more!

I will admit this story is one that makes you cry and want to die one minute and then laugh so hard you pee the next! It was hard at first for me to get into the story, I read the expo a few times a while back but just brushed the story off but when I actually started to read it, I really got into it and it's fucking awesome! I'm sad I don't have anymore chapters so far to read :( Can't wait to read what you post next!

I loved it and I laughed when Lola told Matt what tattoo she was getting