^Sorry :oops: I'll try harder in the future XD
August 27th, 2009 at 08:34pm
Shh! Stop catching on about the hair thing :tehe:
- Something Sweet:
- ^I know! Luce needs to rub off on her a bit :tehe:
But aww, poor Cara.
And I really want to know why she had to cut her hair, I know it's gonna be interesting :)
The curse of being a good person :lmfao
- Masterpiece:
- She's too good for her own good. I mean... She wants to leave the hospital, but she won't.... :crazy: God help her! :XD
Really?!
- Alphabet Soup:
- Ah don't worry about it... It keeps things interesting... and I found out I wasn't as tired as I though I was. I read the other two chapters and I enjoyed it. You have a good sense of humor. Funny stuff.
Well, anyway... good luck with this story of yours
*subscribed*
Ah don't worry about it... It keeps things interesting... and I found out I wasn't as tired as I though I was. I read the other two chapters and I enjoyed it. You have a good sense of humor. Funny stuff.
- Aprilette:
- m3gAn:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Megan!
- Alphabet Soup:
And thank you for checking it out Alphabet :hug:. Sorry you didn't like the literally being dragged to hell thing, but I hope you do like the story as it goes along. :cute:
- m3gAn:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Megan!
- Alphabet Soup:
:arms: Why Luce? Luce has always had issues. Why not poor Cara? :XD
- DragonxFox:
- :shifty
I'm a review/edit your story soon.
Chapter three has a few mistakes but it was cools. Poor Luce, lol.
Yay, new fan! :arms:
- Something Sweet:
- I tried to properly review but communication eludes me right now.
So I'll say that I liked the way you structured chapter two, and your clever usage of tenses (which I didn't notice till the second time I read it through...)
I also really liked the last line -All we could do, is breathe.- it made me feel Luce's anger and despair, and it made me endlessly sorry for the both of them, but also made me desperate for more.
Finally:
Just before I blacked out, I let my finger slide up and I flipped off the dick.
Now I wanna do that too =]
I'm so happy you like it! I have that same tendency, I like reading stories that have quite a few chapters posted already.
- AimiAiko:
- I must say I saw this story a few times in the last few days, but wasn;t really sure of it, until your friend told me that I might like it since I enjoyed her story, and I must say she was right.
Usually though I don't read stories with only a chapter or two done, but I must say I'm glad I read this one. It was very original and it just kept making you want to read on. Something like the Ture Blood series. lol.
Any who, very nice story and I can not wait for a update on this one and see what is going to happen next. Keep it up and please finish it to the end!
Yeah, DragonxFox(Brigette) is my best friend in real life so we like to support each other :hug:
- m3gAn:
- i really like your story
its SUPER good.
one of my friends and well i guess yours told me to read it
and i LOVE it
*suscribes*
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lmao! :arms:
- Rainie Take Me Home:
- holy shit! see i love how long the chapters are. and the topic you chose to write about is so damn good. this should be an actual book haha. I'm loving it so far, update for my sake and the sake of society!