Speechless. - Comments

Woah, this was a brutal chapter!
It was intense and really good.
I think you would do just fine in a creative writing class :)

I really love this story. I hope you get over your writers block to write some more =)

wow, okay so I absolutely LOVE this story!

Gah!
Of course!
Of course when I just start reading this great story you had to stop it at the most intense part.
Pleasepleaseplease update soon.
Please and thank you.
Your new subscriber,
Sarrah.!:D

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I have a bad feeling that John's going to get hurt, because I honestly think he has no idea what he's getting into.

I agree. I hope he doesn't get hurt, but this is one scary situation. I loved the kiss, it was not expected at all and was perfect.

if anything happens to anyone other than viper i'm going to cry haha
but really now, i really hope that won't happen.
and although it was minor i enjoyed that kiss between mia and john.
man i hope everything turns out okay, i really don't like cliffhangers haha :(

I have a bad feeling that John's going to get hurt, because I honestly think he has no idea what he's getting into.
I hope he doesn't get hurt, though. D:

Update again soon, yeah? :) <3

Oh wow!
That was crazy!
I'm flipping out.
Holy chips!
I can't wait for more!
UPDATE QUICK!

So, I loved the chapter but you may want to reread it for any typos/spelling or grammar errors. I like how Mia still cares for the tunnel people even though she's reunited with her family. I do like Metallica, and I hope they make it out together. Good chapter, =)

How have I not been reading this?

I really, really liked this chapter.
It shows how defiant and caring Mia is, and how she still cares for The Tunnel People, even if she's back with her family.
And Metallica seems like an interesting character - I hope she can stay in the story :)

Update soon, please :)

why do i feel like matt is going to ruin things when he actually means to help?
i hope i'm not right.
i really hope they make it out.

Wow.
Mia's definitely gotten herself into a dangerous situation, but I honestly can't blame her for wanting to save Mickey from that life. I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that Amelia, Metallica, and Mickey will get out of the apartment safely.

wow just wow

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That was quite an intense chapter.
It must've been a huge shock for Matt and John to see the darker side of Mia, then find out that she wasn't going back to the tour with them. I hope that Renee can help out before Mia finds herself in even more trouble down there.

Couldn't have said it any better myself. You might want to reread the chapter for coding and maybe one spelling error.

I looovvveee this story sooo much. Post soon!

That was quite an intense chapter.
It must've been a huge shock for Matt and John to see the darker side of Mia, then find out that she wasn't going back to the tour with them. I hope that Renee can help out before Mia finds herself in even more trouble down there.

Amazing chapter. Update soon, plz? (:

love it

great charper! update soon :)