December 27th, 2009 at 04:48pm
Awwwww... they are cute, like little kids fighting over Monopoly properties.
I like the fact that you portrayed Brendon and Ryan and Jon as friends. Not many people do that, since... you know.
But I loved the update, and the little hint in AN, well I can't wait for the next chapter.
loved the little "history lesson" or Ryans Past
loved the whole thing :D