The Young and Lost Club - Comments

just to let you know, you are really awesome at the "now & then" writing style. and it's not just the italics, haha.

LOVE THIS STORY TIMES A MILLION KAJILLION BADILLION!
you're supa dupa cool for creating this!

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Hmmmm........Right now it just sounds like she doesn't miss him or love him anymore...she just misses and loves what they used to have. So like when describing how the kiss was painful and how they both started crying...it sounds like it's because the feelings are no longer there. BUT because it ended so horribly, they still need their closure in order to clear that up.

I haven't been in this exact situation but that's how I feel/felt and I def felt much better and realized it really was over/there were no more feelings till we got the closure we needed.

LOL at me getting all into it...but that's the way I interpreted this chapter. :P
Maybe she really WILL end up with Ryan at the end?!

Dammit! When are they going to get back together?
You said that there wasn't much left. I need a happy ending here.
Please?

AHHHHH FDJALKFJDAL THIS IS TOO INTENSE. i think i forget to breathe when i read it. he's so upset :( update again soon please, ahh! i just want the rest of the story!

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love the update :D

No no no no no no no no no no no no nonnooo!! She can't forgive Brendon!! Stay strong, Clark!! Aghh!!

WHY DO I GET SO INTO THIS? AND OMG IT'S SO INTENSE AND I LOVE IT AND YOU'RE WRITING IS AWESOME. But ommgggg, I so don't forgive Brendon

I really really want you to update :)

love the update :D

that awkward moment when you start crying because you want to fix brendon and clark and then your tears of sadness turn into tears of shrieking laughter because you forgot about making that banner oh my god

lmaooo i love the banner!!
and WEEE to all these updates!! but i am very sad it'll be ending soon! :O

btw, you can totally tell ryan has the hots for clark. hahahahahh!!
honestly, i wanted to punch brendon in the face while reading this. :P

I don't know how long I can wait for more updates! You should just...upload the last few all at once ;)

Y-your almost done with the story?
You can't do this!
I love it too much.
You've been updating a ton lately, I liked it until you said you were ending but an epilogue?
Sweet Jesus!
Can't wait. =)

Ah, I'm so happy you updated again! this is so heartbreaking :( but really? only a few more chapters? they better end up together or I'ma be pissed hahaha.... is there going to be a sequel?

love this love this love this love this love this. omgg, this was so intense and so so good

Holy crap.
I was holding my fist to my mouth the entire time reading the chapters I missed.
I'm all caught up now. :)
But seriously, it was so intense. I can't wait for more.

Clark may seem like a bad person but Brendon is a cheating bastard :)

love the update :D

ahhh I loved it.
Love it when he calls her out.
Love it when she gives into him
and love it when she tells him to get the fuck out.