Fragmented. - Comments

That was such an adorable chapter! I feel psychic now.

No, but really, you did an excellent job. Just the way the whole scene came out was perfect and very easy to imagine. You've got a way with words.

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Ah, the concert! Which show are you going to? I'm going to be at the Vegas show this Friday...I'm so nervous and anxious and just...yeah. I can't wait to see them.

God, this chapter was so believable. I was reading it and I can only imagine the amount of times they've had the conversation about Billie's studio time and I always say it, but Adie must have the patient of a saint to have put up with him. Can't wait to read the next part, I only log on when this story's been updated haha =]

oh, lovely :)
I love them both, they're amazing.

I really want to know now what will happen in the studio

I almost fell aslepp during An Inconvenient Truth aswell. Probably both times I saw that movie. Schools seem to like that one x]
But great chapter as usual, reading this was probably the most exciting part of my day. God, I'm pathetic x]

Yes, sadly I'm subscribed to some of these sad stories. >> But only because I'm hoping that they'll get better one day, and besides...it helps to kill time for the good stories like yours that I really do want to read.

I love Glorida, she's so sweet.
And why are Billie and Adie fighting so much??

Awww, Gloria and Christian are so cute.

I hate pointless stories too, and people that don't know how to end their stories. Then they just go on forever about nothing.

Kyra:

Oooh, are you sure they're /really/ related? Or are they just close in a brother/sister way and refer to each other as that?! oO

No, but really, this was a great chapter. Short and sweet, but still very progressive as far as the plotline goes. I'll read stories at times where, amongst the predictable, boring storyline it has (Billie Joe and some girl 20 years younger than her are together and he stalks her all the time), the chapters will usually be completely pointless. I swear to you, there was one story that updated with a chapter that was maybe two, SHORT paragraphs that did nothing at all to the plot. It was just an update for the sake of updating, and it annoyed me so bad. >: Thankfully I wasn't subscribed in the first place and didn't have to bother to unsubscribe.

But yeah, wonderful work. :D

You're asking me? :XD
I KNOW ALL!! :hand:
:tehe:
but yeah, I completely agree.
the ones that irk me the most though, are the ones that are super long (like rediculously long) but are pointless. Like, they could've said all that in half the length...
but...enough story bashing :shifty
thanks for your comment :cute:

Oooh, are you sure they're /really/ related? Or are they just close in a brother/sister way and refer to each other as that?! oO

No, but really, this was a great chapter. Short and sweet, but still very progressive as far as the plotline goes. I'll read stories at times where, amongst the predictable, boring storyline it has (Billie Joe and some girl 20 years younger than her are together and he stalks her all the time), the chapters will usually be completely pointless. I swear to you, there was one story that updated with a chapter that was maybe two, SHORT paragraphs that did nothing at all to the plot. It was just an update for the sake of updating, and it annoyed me so bad. >: Thankfully I wasn't subscribed in the first place and didn't have to bother to unsubscribe.

But yeah, wonderful work. :D

ahahaha!
Billie and Adie's argument was hilarious! Just imagine what would have happened if the boys would have heard it all!!! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!

Poor Billie. Doesnt get laid.

Awww, I don't like fighting. And I agree with Caznesss, your dialogues are fantastic.
Great chapter as usual =D

great as always

I love this fic, I honestly never know what I'll be reading when I click on the next chapter <3 And your dialogue is amazing, its so believable!

Tre <3

Seriously, wtf Dujo!
That was one of the coolest elements to the stories section here. What's next, the damn layouts?! >: The stories?!

I know, I was trying to see if the page needed to keep on loading so I could hear the music, and then I realised the player wasn't there. D:

Very good, as usual. I liked the extra bits of dialogue, like the part with Tre and the sausage. Ha!

Legomannj:

I didn't see that one coming, and I love it. Non predictable fan-fics are the best =D=D

Thanks. :cute:
I try to not make it predictable

Ahhh, DOOOODE.
This was great. :) and sad in like the bestest way.
I don't want Billie and Adie to be mad at eachother. :(
BUT oh well. That just makes it alll the more better. :D

I didn't see that one coming, and I love it. Non predictable fan-fics are the best =D=D

ohh here come the long lost baby... or the TWO babys!!!
I love Christian already :) he's amazing. Is he taken? haha, just kidding.

I highly doubt this could be any more amazing... Two chapters in and you have accomplished this:) I officially love you.

AND it's even better because that was EXACTLY how I pictured Christian and Gloria to be. ahhhh. I'ma go before I babble the poor comment box to boredom:)