You Can't Have Me - Comments

GREAT UPDATE
and it was totally realistic, it had me on the verge of tears
please update soon
<3 Michele

oh my god. that chapter was fucking amazing. you did a great job on it.

Hi.. um can post again?lol i come home after work and after school and check to see if you have, i really love this story! Its super good! and i just thought maybe if i asked nice you would post.. :) soo PLEASE can you post again?

I loveloveLOVE your story! I was literally crying when... I don't even know... Basically, I was crying in every sad part. lol And guess what? That rarely happens to me when I'm reading! Dangg you're good hahahaha <3

Okay, can you please explain to me how I was the first commenter on this? (Like, when you posted the chapter.) I'm pretty sure that you didn't post it right before I came home...

(Sorry, but this may be a bit shorter than the original was. It's kind of hard to remember everything I said before Safari stopped working, and at this point, I'm really just skimming over everything. (Don't look at me like that! I still have to read HTBH.))

I cannot tell you how amazing the first three paragraphs are in this. They're just completely mind blowing. (And I'm actually serious. Just in case you thought I was being bichy sarcastic Iggy.)

Wow, Ashleigh. You is mean.
You're making Kyle all sweet (and shit) and then you decide to go ruin it by having her think about Brian all the time. (But I would be on your case if didn't so I guess this works.)

I love how you can simply refer to Brian as 'he' or even 'him' and I still know exactly who you're talking about. (Although, there really is only two options for the love interest, so it's not too hard to put it together.)

Otay, you cannot even imagine the size of the frown on my face right now. The stuff when Kyle says to get her stuff, and then the phone call with Johnny. ...Is all so sad.
:(
(I cannot believe I just used a frownie-face. Is so fung weird...)

Ooooh, angry Johnny.
Brian better be careful. A temper mental midget is coming after him. (Ah, fung. Now I'm being mean to Johnny. Do you see what you've started?!)

Aw, Matty. Why break up the fight? It could've been funny.
Maybe Brian would sort of like roll over and fart in Johnny's face. That would've been fung priceless!

Boo, you whore. Making the ending all sad. You is no fun.

...I has no response to that Author's Note. It would only be the same thing as last time. (That's a hint there, Grampaa. Your A/N's are getting real repetitive.)

...BYE!

awwww!!!!thats so sad, i think you wrote the ch. really well

Loved it, and i don't think It's going down hill I just think it's an intersesting storyline. Love it and can't wait for more.

Its good. I can see either the story ending in heartache for everyone or you make the last chapter amazing and everything is happy dappy with the world.Tis really up to you :) I found this chapter to be good. Very well written for only an hour and you did get everyones perspective in which was nice.

Great job and I hope you enjoyed my comment :D

Stupid B***CH drugging Brian up! Ugh! More soon, please?

I think this chapter was wonderful!
At least now we know what happened to Brian. :)
I hope this is something him and Johnny can fix
<3 Michele

that chapter was great. thankyou for updating

Okay, so as you know, I'm commenting later. My computer's being a little bitch, and even the mouse isn't working properly.

I have a lot of stupid homework and studying to do tonight, so I probably won't end up commenting on both this and HTBH today.

Maybe tomorrow or Friday.

But, right now, I have to restart my bitch of a computer.
BYE!

P.S.- I don't see why everyone seems to hate Brian
I doubt he actually slept with the girl. Everyone needs to remember she bought him a drink
and she probably drugged it ...
so yeah... i still like Brian :)
don't love him anymore b/c of that whole won't put out comment but yeah :)
So Update soon!

Update soon por favor!!

Must...resist urge...to st-stab Kyle and Brian....re-re-resist DAMN YOU, RESIST!

*jaw drops* WHAT! No way! Grr...and yes, missy, I am upset! Brian just gah..and what the heck just happened?

S-so maga p-p-pissed at Brian, must re-resist killing puppy! I'm gonna kill Brian instead of the puppy!

WWHHAAAT!?

Shit this is not good so not goood -____- and why couldn't Brian move?! did he get liqour poisioning? Jeez Brian should have just bite his tongue when he talked to abby but nooo he let his dick speak for him! men -__- ugh....

Great job, I loved it and i can't wait for more :D

oh honey. i dont care WHEN you update, so long as you do update! i love the updates! i dont live for them but they rock my socks when i get the email lol.
it was great by the way. was brian drugged? did i miss a chapter? probably... but it still was awesome x