September 27th, 2007 at 06:13pm
Sorry my comment was delayed, I read the update, completely loved it, then never got to comment on it, so i'm sorry about that.
Why is this one story so captivating? What do you do that makes me love this story with a greater bond than most of the ones i read? Why does it almost completely take over my life? Why do I feel a rush of excitement when i see an update?
these questions may never be answered because the only words that can answer it is the ones that make up your story. It's surreal. What you have written is unbelievable.
Why you have three stars right now is a mystery. You deserve all of them, the way you bring out the chapters. It made me so sad to see Frank's Valentines Day going not so well, but what did i expect? Gerard is a horrible person, and i can barely stand what he's doing to Frank. If nothing happens to Gerard soon, it'll be bad, because Frank will barely have a chance of survival.
Gerard's 'Love" letter really crushed me. But once again, this is Gerard. But I wish he'd open up his feelings. Really, how cold hearted could one person possobly be? They way you pare these two; the sensitive and indestructalble, up is just breath-taking read about.
And last, and the most important, i decline to believe it was a prank love note. Somewhere in my heart, i'm being screamed at that Frank does have someone that's in love with him. He does I swear it....
update soon. It's really and truly amazing.
I just finished reading the whole thing and it's amazing, seriously.
You really are one of the most talented authors on here, without a doubt, and it's sad that this story doesn't have the billion comments that it deserves.