Heartbeat - Comments

Poor Frank I can't stop getting emotional at your writing, it's just...... just..... i can't tell you what it us. But I can tell you it's amazing
and i can tell you i completely love it
and i can tell you i can't wait for updates
and i can tell you i can't take my eyes off it

Wow. Wow. It's almost hard to take it all in
It makes me start getting all tear-jerked and like I want to take Frank, and help all his problems go away. I feel like I am Frank and have nothing to say at points, but i also want to break Gerard so badly
update
i can't even... wow.

epic, just epic.

Awwwwww....Frankies definately going to need that ice cream now.

So utterly sad and so amazing.

-Kristaa
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this is one brill story please update
you r a really great writer

Dude, I can totally understand Frank's perspective. He's kinda like some android who is afraid to move or talk. A robot. This story is so close to hitting home for me. It's amazing, brilliant and all the other positive adjectives there are. I find it interesting the way you write, the way you kinda allow the reader to explore Frank's mind and understand almost exactly what he's feeling and going through. I have never come upon another author who does that as precise and vivid as you. You should totally look into being a journalist or novelist when you’re older, I think it’s right up your alley.

Anyway, I like the ending sentance of this chapter especially. I dunno why. But brilliant update. </3

:O woah... that's all I can say, woah.
You're a brilliant writer.
Gerard's quite the asshole though :/

My LOVE in a BOX is lonely. I'm like, the only one commenting.

Whatever. Great update. Again. Poor Frank.

-Kristaa
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I couldn't leave without complimenting chapt. 3.

And, of course, it was unbelievable. Honestly.

All I want to know is how the fuck do you do it??

XD nvmd. It rocks.

-Kristaa
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Wow.

I can't believe how amazing you and your stories are.

Brilliantly done. Pisses me off and makes me wanna grab Frank, throw him on a couch and give him an entire tub of choco ice cream, just to make him feel better. I think I'll go do that right now.

Keep it up.

-Kristaa
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I am literally hypnotized.
It's not often that I come across a story so thoughtfully layed out and complete, and I've never felt the way I do at the moment. I'm in a trance.
I was just staring at the screen reading, and when i came to the end, i realized there were tears running down my cheeks. Just.... wow. Amazing
It's incredable. Incredable.
beautiful.

Uhh, what an asshole. Gerard, I mean. Sometimes I hate it when people force other people into having sex with them or whatever just because they want it really badly. I can totally understand Frank being stuck in his own little world, away from reality. He doesn't even try to tell Gerard he doesn't want to fuck around with him or anything. Well, it's not like Gerard would listen to him anyway.

This is interesting so far. I really want to find out what's gonna happen next. :D
Great update.

Yet another remarkable fanfiction that needs more recognition. All of your stories are so different from the others on this site. Sometimes I actually think you are a grown adult because you have the most charismatic vocabulary. Trust me, that’s a compliment.

Anyways, I like where this story is going so far. It’s also rather sad, and that is a true remark. I don’t usually cry at fanfiction, but I have to admit some of your work makes me think about stuff to the point where I kinda breakdown. That is a sign of impressive writing.

~subscribes~

Though you probably already know I’m subscribed to all of your stories. :D

It's interesting so far =]

Kinda like how he turned numb instead of crying--
a big difference from other fanfics.

hope you post more soon!

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that's so sad =[
poor Frank
i love where the story's going, update soon