When It All Fell Apart - Comments

update anytime soon?

more more more! :D
I WANT MORE! :D

OH.
I was so excited when you updated. :D
AND.
I can tell.
Your writing style has changed,
but it's not a bad thing,
I actually really like it.<3
Anyways.
This was really cute,
I almost had a heart attack,
this Jared kid needs to go like die in a hole,
and I hope you update soon. :)
x3

I like the update!
I thought that everything in the story was fine.

i love this story
i hope you do try and make something of the characters
becasue, well...
i love them :D

stupid mom's boyfriend's sons.
god, i hate them.

yeah, its really good. you have amazing skill. really. a writing talent.

and please, do update. i need to know what happens next.

I miss this story! :(
Please update <3

could you update..!? for mee...?? please! aha i love your story.. really ..

agh! i love it so much! i really cant wait for the update!
pleas, please hurry the fuck up!

I love this story.
Please Update Soon?!?!?!

Awh:( Poor Colton.
-Hugs-
YES! He won't do it though now that he loves Cameron(:
They're so cute together(:
-Squeals-
xP
Update soon!(:

I love this story.
I loved the first one too.
Please update soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Oh. My. God. I love this story. You don't even understand. I just read all of the prequel then all of this and I was spazzing out the whole time! First of all, I'm a huge fan of slash, incest, and twins. So gay twincest = food for my soul. And second of all, Cameron and Colton are such adorable characters! I love their personalities and the way they love each other so much. And as much as you beat yourself up about them, you write exquisite sex scenes. I'd give you constructive criticism but this story is just perfect. Please update soon!

xo

I really liked the emotional-ness of this chapter.
You did a great job of portraying their past and present feelings. (:
Update soon? <3

I really liked this chapter, that he was opening up to him.
Also, I liked the fact that it goes from light-hearted to emotional etc. because it gives different aspects to this story and their relationship. It's lovely.

I can't wait for more :D

My friend just asked me what I was reading. I was just like 'Some random twincest.' Then she looked at me wide-eyed and was like 'What the hell is a twincest?' I mean, seriously? I was all 'Arin, it's incest... but with twins.' Then I looked away and mouthed 'Wow' to my sister. Lol.

Nuh uhhhh, it didn't suck! It was really...sexy...xP
You have to update soonnnn! ^.^

awwwww I love this chapter sooo much:D and it was sooo hot:D and I can´t wait for the next chapter:D you know Colton has to proove that he´s better than good in stuff like this too:D

HOTNESS