When It All Fell Apart - Comments

Hey I really loved it:) please update a little bit more:D I just find myself a little bit more addicted to twincest stories:D even if my friends don´t like it at all:D but it´s probably just because, when twincest is said, the first thought in their mind are Bill and Tom, from TH...and I was the same, but I just hate TH sooo I found my love to something like this just now:D

Awww, yay! They're back togetherrrrr! :D
<3 Mos def update more? :]

ah! more! please!

Waaa I kind of love this story...or so I loved the prequel, which I´d read today in work...And when I got home I actually remembered that there was a sequel...and I like this probably a little more, because there´s no narrator...and okay:D

And I really want some updates, pleaaaseeee

I actually really enjoy this. Since recently I have been having the biggest craving for original slash, and I don't usually like incest, but this is sweet. Cameron and Colton should totally get back together! ;]

and other than a few spelling errors you write pretty well.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This story=love!!!! Can't wait for the next update. :)

The poem was so sweet! ^ ^
Haha. Awww, so Colton DOES feel the same....ish....xD
O:
I'm so exciteddddd! ^ ^

Haha Colton's taking a break from P.O.V.'ing the story. But that poem and Cole's words made my heart wrench. I really want to shake Cameron until he realizes. That'll be fun...

I could not stop shaking through the whole entire series. Ugh it is SO wonderful. I nearly cried my way through the chapters..in a good way I mean. More pretty please? I mean you kind of left us hanging with how close the twins got before Cole decided to be a bitch and Cameron FINALLY finding Cole's poems/writings escapades. So, more please?

*Squeals.*
Yay the sequel.
I love it.

I really like this story. I like the way you write it, and that fact that it's not cliché. It's different, and written pretty well. Good job.

awsomeee update.
i <3 this story a lott.

Nice work :D

Omgosh, they were SOOOOO close! *Sigh.* UGH.
xD Lawlz. Anyways.
Ooooooo, I wonder what Cameron's gonna read! :DD

Love it =] Last chapter was freakin amazing, keep it coming!

Awwww, Cameron's so sweet. ^ ^
Updateeeee? :]
(Man, am I the only one commenting? -____- Seems to happen with every single story I read.....)

Omgosh! Moving?!? Oh noes! O:
I thought Colton was gonna say somethin else. xD
Update?

Aw, I love it. :] Update soon? :]

LOVE IT!!!! more soon? pwease?

YAY the sequal! I love it!!! more soon??

awww i already feel bad for cameron..
i can't believe they are in the same class..that is going to suck big time until they make up (if they ever do)

...i wonder what's up with colton...cuz we all know he is acting strange.
hmmmmmmmmm'

i like it so far, keep it up