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  • karin;

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    Hot, hot, hot. :3
    Don't worry; you're doing fine. (:
    Update soon?
    December 12th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • eric halvorsen

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    Throughout I was expecting their mum to come bursting in and catch them in the act but I'm very glad she didn't. Plus, the last line made me laugh so much, I love them both.

    More when you can?
    December 12th, 2009 at 04:23am
  • Hezzarther

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    Last line. Lol.
    December 12th, 2009 at 03:47am
  • vAmPiRe00FREAK

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    love the story!!! xoxoxox
    December 8th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • Gates of Delirium

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    owww I like the idea of their room and coltons plans:D and I definitely can´t wait:D sooo I hope you´ll update soon:)
    December 7th, 2009 at 01:18am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Oh my gah. You people...Comment and subscribe like naowwww. I wanna see.
    -Waggles Eyebrows-
    xP
    Update soonnnnn! ^.^
    December 6th, 2009 at 11:20pm
  • thornlily

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    I hope you know I almost fell off my bed when I saw this updated
    and I also squealed
    I absolutely adore this story :)
    PLEASE KEEP WRITING~ :3
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:40pm
  • thornlily

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    I hope you know I almost fell off my bed when I saw this updated
    and I also squealed
    I absolutely adore this story :)
    PLEASE KEEP WRITING~ :3
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:40pm
  • Band Craptice.

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    I COMMENTED!! and subscribed.. a LONGG time ago.
    DOES THAT MEAN YOU GET TO UPDATE WITH ALL THOSE PLANS AND STUFF?!?!
    :D hahah, loved the update. (:
    December 6th, 2009 at 03:25pm
  • eric halvorsen

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    Oh gosh, why'd it have to stop right there?! D: I really want to hear all about his plans, haha.
    I didn't except them to move though, that came out of nowhere but maybe it'll be good, I guess we have to wait and see. I'm so glad they're back together, it's so much nicer that way and I thought the poem was really lovely (:

    I can't wait for more whenever you update.
    December 6th, 2009 at 07:19am
  • Freiheit

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    Love it
    UPDATE FASTER
    please?
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • Ms.Hopeless_Savage

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    you make him out to be a tease but you are too you tease me with goodness but then theres no next chapter lol
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:51am
  • Hezzarther

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    Dirty plans? :D
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:47am
  • karin;

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    I feel really bad 'cause this is my first time commenting one of your stories. :X
    Anyways, I love this story very much.
    &Cameron and Colton are one of the cutest things.
    If that makes sense, after what has happened.
    I think you should update soooon. (:
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:56am
  • BerlynnHavok

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    Oooohhhh!!! more pleasah!
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:23am
  • Niall James Horan

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    wooot this story is inteeense and amaaaazing!! continue sooon!! PRETTYYY PLEEAASEE xD
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • sourwolf.

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    omg you updated! lol j.k (:
    this story is awesome.
    update soon;D
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:00am
  • Hezzarther

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    So. I just read this.
    Can I has more? :D
    December 5th, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • Freiheit

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    I love it <3
    November 22nd, 2009 at 03:32am
  • space is for stars.

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    Yay! They're back together!
    Now you've made the story more intresting, so you need to update more, so I can see what happens. :)
    November 14th, 2009 at 02:43am
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