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I just called the chapter an "episode" I'm sorry, I'm freaking out if you can't tell.

I just called the chapter an "episode" I'm sorry, I'm freaking out if you can't tell.

Okay, every episode just makes me freak out. I have never ever read anything like it in my life. I just realized it was on hiatus and i'm done.

PLEASE FINISH THIS IM DYING HERE!

Okay...all caught up. WTF IS THIS!? I think this is the most confusing and intellectually stimulating fanfiction I have ever read. I love it. Every single second of it. Even the rereading when I had no idea what was happening! Okay, so will Bergy and Amanda end up together? God I hope so. Such good chemistry with them. I tried reading this story a little while back but couldn't get into it...I'm sure glad I tried again. Flawless Standing Ovation Loved It.

"Yeah, actually, just a little bit. It got me my shits and giggles, so sue me." This line. I just love that phrase, and it was just perfect!!! And I have class early tomorrow, BUT I'M GOING TO READ THIS ANYWAYS!

Alright, so I'm officially all caught up. But I'm still confused as to why she threw half of her clothes out at the beginning of the story. And I'm really curious what she is keeping from Bergy? Also, I know things aren't as simple as they appear and this is going to be a lot more complicated than what were being lead to believe at the moment. Please update soon?! I'm really excited to see where this all goes. Oh and one more question? How do you know about all this psychology stuff? I'm very impressed.

Why did she throw away half of her clothes?

I'm a bit confused by the living situation too. I know she was staying with Lex or was it someone else that she was pretending to be cousins with? But Patrice and Lucic live there too?

Ignore my pervious comment. I now know that Tera is Lex's best friend and sleeping with her (kind of) man. And that Avery and Lex are, in fact, two different people. But who is Avery, because I don't remember if there was a formal introduction to her, she just kind of showed up? Is she dating one of the guys? Sorry again.

I just started and I really like it so far. I'm just confused and I'm hoping you see this so you can clear somethings up for me. Are Lex and Avery the same person? And who is Tera? Did we meet her yet? I'm sorry for asking. Lol.

just re-read this. still gets me giddy/excited. might read it again.

I honestly do not know where to begin.Well first of all, I am currently taking psychology and I ABSOLUTELY love this story for that aspect.The storyline is soo complex and I love it, mostly because complexity is so enticing :) I love her thought process and how quickly she can profile people.In class we haven't gotten to profiling but I am so ready for it! (Because I am ok at reading people and picking up their vibes I guess you could say? It's a Pisces thing I guess!)I am supposed to be writing a short story for my english class, but I was too busy reading this awesomeness :p I do not know how ahead you are in writing this, but I think we all want Amanda and Bergy together at some point ;) and of corse we don't want Amanda to leave once this is all over!! I mean, they don't have to end up married or with children because that is sort of cliche (but I still love stories like that!)But I really love how different this story is, and I like that I have that psychology connection to it!But anyways, great story and I am psyched for the next update!Happy New Year's :D

Woah, Matt's getting pretty suspicious, i don't like it :(
Nice save by Patrice, and I totally think Marc Savard is a sweet heart <3
This was amazing, I can't wait to see what your brilliant mind comes up with next!
:)

I am really liking this story! I can't wait for the next update!

Sure, it may have been a filler in progressing Amanda's plan along and tying up those loose ends, but it was anything but a filler in regards to Amanda's relationship with Patrice. He was obviously a little nervous about what exactly she's doing, but with one simple sentence--him covering her ass--it's clear he's put his faith in her. And of course the text just confirms it. Now if only she'd put her complete faith in him, too, in more ways than one. It wouldn't be ludacris for him to want her to stay, after all. They may haven't talked about it yet, but it's obvious from how he acts around her, the thought of her leaving Boston isn't something he wants!!

I cannot wait to see how you wrap this one up in the coming chapters!! Amazing as always! <3

I feel my comments are repetative, but I love every chapter! They always leave me wanting more! I want to know about the contents of the manilla folder, Amanda's plans, and how exactly she's going to win this one! This story is fucking crazy, but I love it. It's so thought-provoking and wonderful and heartbreaking and sexually frustrating! Amanda and Patrice need to just climb all over each other already. I know these chapters are leading up to something big, and I can't wait!! <3

I just spent my whole day reading this straight through! This is probably the most creative and original story on all of Mibba. I couldn't even if I wanted to! No joke. Your story is amazing and I hope you update soon!!

YAYYYYYYY an update!! lol ts was really good. I can't wait to find out how they got everyone prepared for what's about to go down. Congrats on passing your final! :)

I've just read the first two chapters, because I'm taking this story slow, unlike my usual.
I REALLY enjoy this. You have no idea how nice it is to read some psycho analysis and psychology when most of the world is hell bent on being as lazy and stupid as possible.