Rich Man - Comments

I absolutly love this story! I found it and couldn't stop reading, you are an amazing, amazing writer. Lex loves Blake? Oohhh I can't wait to see what happens there. Patrice and her have this unexplainable connection that is so intriging. Absolutly incredible story!! Update soon!!

I just found this story and I'm proud to say that it has given me hope that there is good writing on this website! Your descriptions are amazing and the emotion is incredible. I'm really in awe right now. I just spent the last hour and a half reading it and I am VERY impressed. Thanks for putting up such a great read.

I absolutely love this story. I love the fact that she's ready to toy with Looch, but feels absolutely terrible. I adore the fact that she's in love with Patrice but terrified to admit it. But the fact that I love most of all is that she can't keep her cool around any of the guys with a shirt on or off XD Update soon, I love it!

i just found this story and i have to say: it is absolutely spectacular! Please, please, please keep writing...more patrice!!!

I had a feeling!
But, wow, way to throw a wrench in there.
The other girl can just go disappear now since she's never around anyways.
Seriously, this is so good.
You blow my mind more with every update.
More soon. <3

Comment: Holy shit I knew it! I love this, keep updating!
Question: So does Milan forgive her since he's being pretty... yummy around her?
Concern: You've got me unhealthily hooked on this story. Feed my addiction soon? Please?

I KNEW IT!
LEXY LOVES BLAKE!
He should dropped that other chick like a basketball and get with lex
<3<3<3<3<3<3
Ugh,
the way you described Milan when they were swimming,
yummmmmm
so yummm
<3<3

Loved this chapter, as every other chapter, as this whole story!
Morrree would be nice <3<3<3<3

first of all, i wouldn't exactly call this fluff. it was definitely prgress.
and second, even your "fluff" is fantastic. how the fuck is that possible?!
you're amazing.

Stop trying to confuse me AFTER I figured shit out.
Ahahaha, just kidding.
I actually enjoy the confusion.
Um yeah, I love Patrice but Idk what the eff he is doing.
More soon. <3

This is quickly becoming my favorite, even over FSP.
You are CRANKING this out and I LOVE it (:

I love that we're really starting to get a taste of Patrice and sort of what he's all about. I'll say it again, I realyyy hope they can get together in the end (:

and the part where she's like "what the shit?" made me laughhhh :D haha

Whyyyyyyy is my head spinnning?
Oh yes,
Patrice wants Ray, but pushes her towards Milan??
Sayyy whhhaaattt?????
CONFUSING,
and Ray is starting to admit her feelings for Patrice,
good, lets see some action =D=D=D <3
I got to open my christmas presents like 2 hours ago because we all want to sleep in and when I come down I see THIS???
Best Christmas EVER!!!
Love this chapter, as every other chapter, and thanks for the wonderful christmas present,
it made me squeal and stay up for another 15 minutes.

BERGY. Why so fucking cute? I love the fluffiness of this chapter even though Ray was about to pass out. I can't even explain it.. it's just...a sdfljkhasdlfkhsdlfkjhasdfjkhasdkfjhasdfkjahsd. Put him under mah tree, plz? Thanks.

No, but really, I love you for updating this so much. I'm sorry I fail at updating like you but I'll get back there.. eventually. I need to. It'd be good for me. But I love you regardless even though you spoil me with updates and I don't spoil you. But you know I love you, right? I spoil you with my love? Yeah, I do. Because I don't love many people. ANYWAYS. YOU'RE A FANTASTIC WRITER. I'M JEALOUS OF YOUR ABILITY AND THIS STORY IS AMAZING.

I like mindfucks only when they're done right and you, my dear, are the master of them. It's perfect. Get my wheels turning, I want them to esplode. Not really, but you get them turning anyways. Even though I know more than I should about this story. Haha.

ps: nights like tonight when i'm having a complete shit of a time and you manage to make me laugh/smile... yeah, those are the nights i remember why you're in the bullseye ring of my heart. <3

every chapter i say "best chapter so far!" and I would say the same for this but I feel like it's pointless. so, BEST STORY EVER! hahaha

my heart just kept melting the more I read. patrice was suchhha sweetheart, jskdbcksu ughhh. I'm really hoping things work out for the better and they end up together. someway, somehow.

I.Love.You. this was amazing.
poor patrice. these mind games just might kill him. poor little boy.
more updates, more updates!

Patrice, for the win.
He was so good to her.
I love that you're updating this at like a rapid pace especially now that I understand what's going on.
More soon. <3

Ohhh Patrice, I actually really like him and Ray's relationship,
at first I was all like MILAN <3<3<3<3
But now after this chapter I have to say I really like what's going on with Patrice,
amazing chapter, as this whole story is <3

I can't believe she told Milan.
I'm with Amanda...not sure how that's going to play out but right now it doesn't seem like it will be good.
More soon. <3

Amazing,
as always,
hopefully Milan will get over the whole "i'm manipulating you" thing, he's a babe and they need to have more one-on-one time
<3<3<3<3<3<3
can't wait for more, as always!

dsfhgjwethoisdgjkasg.
Love.

why do you have to be so goddamn smart? this is such a cynical/confusing/addicting story. like legit, why can't they just have a very entertaining three-some? i feel like that would be a much better solution :D
love you and i do expect more soon missy!