There Are Still Rules To Break - Comments

Duuuude, best one yet.
Without a doubt.
Patrice is perfect.
More soon. <3

OMG WHUT. HELLO, THIS IS WHAT I NEEDED AFTER A FUCKING 6-1 LOSS WHERE MY BABY DIDN'T ANSWER BRAINWAVE CALLS. Fuck though, I love Patrice. Seriously. you write him wonderfully dahling. <3

Brain. Iz. Mush. I shall post Ben ASAP. Fuck editing. Fuck me wanting to change tenses. Fuck the Ducks.

Anyways. This was wonderous. Your writing is amazing and Patrice (and myself) is perfect. My. God. UPDATE FUCKING SOON OR I ... WILL ... CUT ... MY ... ARM ... OFF ... ?

Not really, but yeah, I'm running out of plausible threats. FML. UPDATE NAO. iF YOU LOVE ME, YOU'LL DO IT. kkthanx.

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Amanda and Patrice are so cute together. I love how she tries to be really confident around him, but end up being a complete ball of nerves. And his determination to end up with her. Also, everytime he whispered in her ear, it gave me chills.

Lmfao, you got rid of "maul," LOL.

Dude. I really like the way you're writing Patrice, all sex driven and seductive. Hehehehehehehe.

He went to wrap his arm around her, but she backed off and mumbled, “Gross.” You know, I find those hugs kind of sexy. Sometimes. Most of the time. Depending on the person. And the activity that made them sweaty. And whether or not we were going out afterwards. Lmfaoooo.

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE. THEY'RE GOING TO HIS PLAAAAACE. =)))))

MORE SOOON TAZER!

P.S. I giggled when you mentioned Looch.

COMMENTS OF COURSE!
You're such a good writer it is insane, just remember your mibba subscribers when you're famous?

I cannot wait for them to finally kiss/hookup//whatever. Update STAT.

HOLY SWEET BABY JESUS. THIS IS SO GOOD. It's also why nobody should EVER let me near a locker room or y'know, just any of the Bruins in general. <3

Seriously though, you're amazing. I love the way you write and Patrice being fucking possessive? That was amazing. I loved it. Plus I got chills when he asked her to wear his jersey. You know me too fucking well bb. It's really scary. JFC.

But uhm.. I kind of need more... like now? Yeah, I'm pretty much addicted so if you don't update soon guess who gets held hostage?!?!

Haha, no I wouldn't do that, but seriously. HIS PLACE? UPDATE SOON, DAMMIT.
Loveee youuuuu.

If he moved his head forward just an inch, their lips would touch.
As tempted as he was to do just that, he broke their staring contest and moved so he was standing outside of her car again.
You tease!
Please tell me it's going to happen at his place.
Btw, the fact that he invited her to his place is an epic win.
More soon. <3

I would love to crash into a shirtless Lucic.
This story made me happy because although they LOST their season opener, Bergy was the only scorer for the Bruins.
I like it, they need to get together, like, soon!

I shouldn't be allowed near any boys locker rooms EVER. It just wouldn't be a good idea.

Anyhow, I like that he kind of helped her along with her interview. AND I SWOONED TOO WHEN HE TALKED ABOUT THE CHILDREN. OMFG.

Pat. Pat. She should call him up for some coffay sometime. Cozy and sweet, haha. Can't wait for moreee!

I shouldn’t be allowed anywhere near a Boston Bruins locker room again.
Should any of us?
So glad Patrice decided to be all forward and put his number in her phone.
Now, she should call him.
More soon. <3

I'm slightly embarrassed to admit that I would act exactly like that. BUT UNGH. THIS IS SO GOOD. IT'S LIKE. ADFKJAHKJFDHKSJFHS. I DON'T KNOW. I JUST NEED MORE. LIKE ASAP. MY THREATS FROM ABOVE STILL STAND.

But seriously though, thus far, I really love how you portray Bergeron ad you know I love story me! <3 Seriously, update soon, bb! Please?!

<33 loooovesssss yoouuu

So loving it, Cant wait for more. I wonder if he'll read all her articles. =)

So loving it, Cant wait for more. I wonder if he'll read all her articles. =)

Lyss, you are cranking out these updates and I loveee it.
Um, these two are destined for each other.
I mean, her business card fell right into his hands...that's fate.
More soon. <3

Love. Love. Love.
I like Patrice's point of view.
I am also quite pleased at how fast you're writing these!!

Patrice had always had an impeccable ability to leave his intensity, his hatred, and his gripes on the ice. There was no room for his intense hockey player persona in his every day life. He had to learn to keep it on the ice as best he could. He had to.

Sounds like what Carlos thinks he can do, but really can't. lmfao. But he looks damn fine in that interview.

OMG. How perfect was it that her business card fell right in front of him?? That's fate right there. Awe, he's reading her article! I love this so much. Good job crankin' these babies out!

SDLFGDKLFGSDLJGLJLJKLKJGSL;DKJGSDLKGSJLKJSLDKFGJLSKDFGSD. WHAT. SLDFJKGSDFKLJ. MORE. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD BEFORE I PASS OUT BECAUSE OF THIS UNHOLY CRUELNESS OF PATRICE BERGERON DROUGHT UPDATE LIKE NOW. PLEASE DEAR GOD.

Anyways, I love this story so much. Almost as much as I love you deary, srsly, it's SO good. Like, I'm addicted beyond belief already.


He found it funny and maybe even a little ironic that the girl that had clouded his thoughts for the past week found solace in the same place he did. He laughed to himself and left an anonymous comment, “Very intriguing article, Amanda. I cannot wait to read more of your stuff on the Bruins. PB.”

KASDJHFKLJASDHFKASDJFHASDJKFHASKJFHAKJFHASKJFHASKJ. OH MY GOD I WOULD LIKE FAINT OR SOMETHING. ASDJKFHASKDJFAS.

Seriously though, what am I doing? I turned him down and peaced out. FML.

Ahhhh! Good for her. I mean shes insane to leave THE patrice burgeron on the sidewalk, but hey make the guy work for it.

Oh yeah I love this story btw =)

What is God's name is Amanda doing?
Gahhh.
Btw, I want her job.
More soon. :]

Why WHY would anyone leave the ever gorgeous #37 on the street like that?!?!?!
My friend used to hold the camera cords in the locker room, she said it smelled so unreasonably awful that it made all the men very unattractive, hahaha.
Regardless, I covet the job of this girl.
I can't wait for more!!!!