MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE. I'm so mad at myself right now, I hope you know. And not just real me, either. HOW COULD I LEAVE PATRICE. I would tell myself to shove my fear away and GET THERE. Hot Patrice waiting? Fuck yes! But I seriously love this story and I'm sorry my update wasn't nearly as good as yours. I just. UGH THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL DAMMIT. I can never compare to your writing, no way. BUT YAY FOR UPDATES. I CAN HAZ MOAR? I love this. <333333333333333333333333
I have never had a thing for a Bruins player but reading this makes me want to go look this dude up.
Even though I know diddly about Bergy, I love this story. I find myself feeling like I'm in it. The way you write sucks me in till the last sentence. Keep up the awesome, out of this world updates.
Well, you know how I feel about the whole, waking up on her stomach thing. And is it weird that when you said She felt his hot breath on the bare skin in between her panty-line and where the shirt she wore had ridden up. i could practically feel it? Kudos Lyss, for making it THAT real, lmfao.
This story is so hot.
And it isn't even SEXY TIMES yet.
But heyyy, kissing is a start. =) Now all he has to do is get carried away, throw her on the bed and have his way with her.
Bahaha at Amanda's mines. It's true kids. She owns this beautiful man. Anyways, this was amazing. I like that Patrice is all like touchy feely and I'd probably pass the fuck out if he ever touched me like that. More soon. <3
MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. That is all I have to say on that subject.
No, but really, this was really good and I know it took you forever to write and all, but just as I predicted it would be, it was amazing. Not sure how many times I can tell you this, but you honestly write me perfectly. Like, I don't even know how you manage to do it, but you do. You have me to a t and Patrice.. well you know how I love him no matter what but your characterization of him is also perfect.
Because y'know... we really are meant to be and everything. ;)
Seriously though, this story is perfect just like everything else you write and I love it so much. I don't even know how many times I can stress that without sounding redundant/like a broken record. It's just... so... perfect. I dunno, I love it. So, update soon? Please? For me? I'll update Ben!
PS: I so want to be held hostage in his apartment. askdjfhaskjfasdf. JUST FUCKING GIVE ME MORE, DAMMIT.