I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

I absolutely love your story! I read Chicago city lights so fast, it was fantastic! I can't wait for an update!

AWW I smell trouble. Not from her but from michael. Hot girl + Pretty Co worker + Hot headed sexy ben eager, It might just be a recipie for disaster. Cant wait for more.

P.s. Its adorable how protective he is. =)

love it!!!! can't wait for more!!!

umm that michael boy better keep his hands to himSELF!
no touchie ben's woman!

I loved it. Everything from when she got up in the mourning to the new guy at work to the evening phone call with Bolland in the background. Can't wait to read the next part.

loved the update but.... not feelin' the whole micheal character, i have a feeling that nothing good is going to come from him.

So Ben is PERFECT. PUUURRRRRFECT. Seriously. I want one. Is he in a catalog? $19.95 plus shipping and handling?! Okay I think I'm off my koo-koo right now.

So this Michael guy... I found myself gasping as well. I hope he doesn't 'F' things up though. I'll kick his ass myself.

Aw Ben is so cute! They are adorable together.
This Michael guy sounds hot and all but he better
not get in the way of Ben and Evelyn.

Love it!! But i'm kind of concerned about the whole let's put Phoebe in here thing. haha

Keep it up!!

loveee thisss!
moreee please!

That's so sweet of Ben, wanting Evelyn to call him while she walks home to make sure she's safe. Seriously, so adorable.

And, I'm not liking this Michael Saunders guy. He's too nice, and I just know he's going to cause problems down the road for Evelyn and Ben. Because, let's face it, you love writing drama as much as I do =)

Can't wait for more!

Sooooo ace, girl.
This new dude sounds like heaven, but you better not even think about going there.
Seriously, no.
Give him to Phoebe.
More soon. <3

....everyone, the introduction of Phoebe, the bad-ass hockey-loving co-worker.
YAY! I am honored to be a part of your story.
I love it, even though this stud of a new guy needs to get off Evelyn's dick.. clearly he has not yet met her boyfriend, who could take his ass with his eyes closed.
Can't wait for moreee!

Michael Saunders, and all his extreme hotness, needs to back off already!

They are such a cute couple! i hope Micheal doesn't ruin what they have! Great Chapter update! Can't wait for the next one!

I wonder if Michael will become a problem for them. Ben and Lynn are too adorable.

Heh, so, this Michael guy sounds like a total studly babe.

I DON'T LIKE IT.

Ugh. I am so happy to read this and at the same time I'm all apprehensive about it because I know bad stuff is going to happen. BAD STUFF.

When she told him she’d probably be at the office late, he made her promise to call him when she was leaving. That way, he could talk to her the whole time she walked home by herself. That made me swoon. *Sigh*

I'm so happy the sequel up I just love this story and I can't wait for the next part

ohh ben, what a sweetie (L)

Awwwwww ben and her are truly adorable!!