I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

I say there should be a third story :)

Definitely more Ben & Evelyn !
Agreed, I can never get bored of those two =)
Fabulous chapter, I hope everything works out between them <3

Random note: I will never,ever forget that game. Not only was it the only game we won against Detroit, but it was my birthday, and I remember watching it at home and freaking out when Marty went down with a concussion.

Anyways, onto the real comment for this chapter: I love that Ben won’t let anyone hit on Evelyn. And, him hitting the puck against the glass was pretty damn funny. Oh, I could just imagine three guys’ reaction to that!

And, of course I’d love to read another installment of this series! I don’t think anyone could ever get bored of Evelyn & Ben!

pleaseeee make a 3rd story!!!! Ben and Evelyn are sooo not going to get boring anytime soon!

I don't want to say goodbye to Ben and Evelyn! :( So i say go for a third part; especially since I trust you won't lead us down a cliche, dragged out story.
I also don't want them to say goodbye to each other...:)
With each part, you have me getting so anxious. I love them together. It's so real.

Soooooooooo, I havent been commenting in awhile because I fail at life.

However, HOW DARE YOU SAY YOU DONT WANT TO BORE US! If you were boring, people wouldnt read it, and last time I Checked, it looks like you have a shitload of readers =)

I could handle either, because I know both will be epic. I think if they do end though, Id like to know where she ends up and such. But ill be happy with whatever you write, even if it means me crying because she gets the dream job, 3 kids and a white picket fence. I Honestly cant wait for more!!!

If you don't write a third part to this story i am going to be very very very mad at you!!!!!!!

i love this story, i just really really hope it works out for them. lol and i loved what ben did to the glass lol totally could see a guy doing that

Loved the part with the puck, definetly cute.
I'd also love a third story with them! :)

OF COURSE I WANT A THIRD GODDAMN STORY. I rushed home after winning the burish picture to read this. After stuffing my face. Mmmmm. THIS IS STORY IS JUST TOO DAMN CUTE. <3

amazing update and i would love to read a third part to this story

oh, you little sneak. you know exactly what i'm talking about. our little IM session where you are TEASING ME WITH THIS STUFF. you KNOW i want a trilogy, i want another story where evelyn and ben STAY IN LOVE AND HAVE LOTS OF BABIES AND STAY MARRIED AND... they just love each other forever!

okay, pushing that to the side, this update was adorable in a sense that i wasn't trying to scroll down to see how it ended before i actually read down that far. ben shooting the puck at the glass in front of those guys was typical ben but at the same time, you could feel the protectiveness of his personality; but, you know, if that was real life i'd probably pissed myself instead of giggling like a girl. after the game i'd smack the poop out of benjamin. southern girls spook easily, eager. i liked how evelyn and ben mingled together after the game as well, especially when sharpie (oh, beautiful sharpie) poked his fine-ass head into all of it. i was pleasantly surprised with the lovely amount of andrew ladd, our favorite awkward blackhawk, in this update; he's nice to look at sometimes, even better to hear talk.

and the ending, oh the ending. poor ben, he's so worried about all of this. i can just see him bouncing his legs and wringing his hands over and over, watching her fall asleep after they had made love, wondering if this is going to be one of the last times he ever gets to do that. such a beautiful update with foreshadowing that is making me nervous as hell.

obviously my vote is with the trilogy, and i loved this update <3

Third story:)

So, to go with my never-ending, telling you how I got the notification, LET'S JUST SAY THAT YOU KNOW WHAT I SAID. Especially what we were talking about... I'm so glad I'm almost 16. ANYWAY, I want to let you know that I'm so in love with Ben and Evelyn being in love and I want you to keep writing this until you're old and married with Ben's kids and by then you'll be writing what REALLY goes on in your relationship, not fiction! So OF COURSE I want you to keep writing this story into the 3rd part.

When I was reading the whole thing about Ben and all his feelings about Evelyn leaving, I felt like I could really connect with that and everyone else can somehow connect with that. One of my best friends had to move away and it was one of the hardest things I had to go through. I spent WEEKS sobbing my eyes out and although its not the same caliber as Ben's despair, for lack of a better word, I can still feel that pain that he feels on some sort of level. It almost seems like there's no way to get out of this situation without winning completely, so Evelyn might as well go for her dream.

As much as I want her to stay with Ben in Chicago, I just try to remember how much I want a certain career and how I wouldn't want to give it up for a guy -- even if the guy is a hot hockey player that can EASILY support me. I want Evelyn to REACH FOR THE STARS. :) And I think she's gonna be preggerrrrrs. Oh, I can't wait to read about Evelyn when she's meggo preggo and all mood swingy and stuff like that. Hahahaha. And Ben will be all, "Omfg. I love you, but can you seriously stop going all crazy-ass pregnant woman on me?" Oh, the awesomeness it will be! I want her to go to NYC, find out she's pregnant (I like how I'm jumping to conclusions), and call Ben and say, "Ben, you made bread, okay?" And he'll be like, "Whaaat?" And she'll be like, "Ben, I have your bun in my oven!" *silence*

Yeah, it'll be great. LOVED THIS CHAPTER. *CHANTS* THIRD STORY, THIRD STORY, THIRD STORY, THIRD STORY!

a third story would be awesomeeee. so not ready to give up this story yetttt. :)

Loved the chapter, just like all the other ones.
I would love another story with them in it. They have to be together, it would break my heart if they weren't. :(

I would love another story with them!

Loved the update!
I would love to see a sequel to this story!

This made me laugh soo hard!
It was also super cute.
But to answer your question I would love love love,
to keep reading another story with these two in it.

Oh these two are perfect for each other.
Always in the mood...hahaha.
I would not object to a sequel but I would also not object to you ending it.
Wow, I'm such a big help.
More soon. <3

Omg. Ben shooting a puck at the boards I could so see him doing!!
Haha.
And I think another sequel would be amazing.
I can't get enough of this story