Sleepyhead - Comments

AHHHHH! This is SOOOOOO good! :D :D :D

I'm swimming in phlegm too :(

I'm so totally in love with this story. Keep the updates coming!

What an interesting dream. I was confused at first, but then again, dreams aren't supposed to make sense. It was hard to picture everything without re-reading it a few times, but all's well. Okayokayokay, so what I really love is this part:

He was cold against my skin, icy, and he smelt like peppermint and shoe polish, my eyes slipping closed as he pulled away with a laugh. His nose was red and his cheeks were scarlett and when he laughed again his eyes shone like stars.

Just... just ugh. It's so simple, but so amazing. Peppermint and shoe polish is such a weird combo, but the way you used it... it just worked. :) And the last part just simply gave me butterflies--like most of your writing haha. Yess. GOOD JOB <3

woah... he has weird but really cool dreams...
I can't wait for more :]

Wicked dream, I wonder what Alex is going to think, waking up right beside him.

i like this chapter a lot..but it confused me a little?
at the ending part, was he awake? or no?..

Well that was a weird arse dream!
I wonder what happens when he wakes up?

OMFG i must find out what happens next!!!! Does he attack sleepyhead? Does he for once find peace in his sleep and discovers that he needs him even more than ever?
GAH! SOOOOOOOO MANY QUESTIONS!!!

Your writing skills are fantastic, it was like I was there. Don't change a THING. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

My friend, you really set the scene. Fuck it felt like I was there, amazing amazing AH-MA-ZING. Yes...And Josh Pyke is badass...well, as badass as Josh Pyke can get ;D

Your writing always makes me want to cry. Really. You express so much emotion using simple words, and it's just like rfhw39-goe;lh45h. Amazing. Just... really fucking amazing.

Chapter 4 is definitely my favorite so far. Short, but it was so very sweet.

Soft lips met my forehead and I gasped as the scream stopped, my throat left feeling red raw, my breath coming in uncontrollable hiccups that made my spine shudder and shake.-- my favorite part of the chapter. I can picture it happening so well. You describe everything just... beautifully, gddammit.

And he was there, and he was soft and warm and real, his long fingers holding onto my wrists and when I opened my eyes he smiled at me.

This part was just so cute... I was grinning like an idiot.

Long and slow, his hair too red to be natural.
Whisper teeth, whisper foot.
Sleepy head.

I love how you don't really describe the kind of red his hair is. It's just... hair too red to be natural. The way I like it--It leaves lots to the imagination. I don't get the 'whisper teeth, whisper foot' part, but it fits so well. Actually, it makes that whole part. And the ending, Sleepy head. Gahh. It just makes me get butterflies. :3

Chapter five was a really good chapter, too. I love the whole smile part. Especially:

There is the soft smile when you apologise to someone, the sheepish grin, the wide smile that you make a split second before you begin to laugh. There are faint smiles and bright smiles, and real smiles and fake smiles, and smiles so delicate and glassy that they break your heart.

The bold sentence is now my Facebook status following / sleepyheadomfg. :3. That's how much I love the words you spill out to make such an amazing story. Oh, God, I probably don't make sense at all throughout this whole comment, but gddammit, I tried! Haha. I really like this story, and where you're going with it. Great job. <3

DUn, Dun, Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuh!
Short but sweet and always with a cliff hanger :P
Awesome XD

Ohman that chapter was fantastic, just so...real. I loved it :D

awww he's helping him with his night terrors! That's adorable! I love your writing, I love how you descrive everything in such great detail, you're a fantastic writer! Like woah! :)

its interesting keep up the good work

God, I love you and your writing. It's simply amazing, the way you describe the settings, the sounds, the feelings. The way you make your character so imperfect, they're perfect... it's like whoa. I really like this story, so guess what? I'm subscribing.

Its certainly very interesting. I like it and should like to see where it goes, so therefore... I SHALL SUBSCRIBE!!!

There is something wrong with my computer. I did not get the email, when you updated :{ But anyways awesome update, as always.

This is so good!
Pleae update soon!

woo! I found this story again!
It sucks that mibba deleted it... but I still lovers it all the same!
keep it up!