The Last Goodbye - Comments

Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter. Oh...new women in the mix...really great.

Awww patty mmm

I have to say the thought of PK actually cooking anything is a little scary.
That Raylene girl seemed legit...but all the others were hoes.
I liked that line at the end by Delaney.
So true.
More soon. <3
And good luck with your last final!

I love this chapter and I hate all of the girls but that one girl I can't sleep her name but it started with a R :) please update again soon:)

Wow. Totally thought I subscribed to this, aaaaand I didn't. Clearly.

My bad, hah.

“And, with you drunk, I’m sure they’ll have some interesting footage,” Adam said. “I mean, for the fifteen minutes before you pass out on the couch. Because we all know you can’t hold your liquor,” he clarified.

LMFAO. I can SO picture that in real life.

“So, what should I do to get a woman like you?” Adam asked.

“You should turn into someone else,” she suggested with a laugh.

OH MY GOD. The look I pictured on Bur's face after that, lmfaoooo. SO. CLASSIC.

I'm not really looking forward to these girls coming. You know there's going to be bitchy and annoying ones, and they are going to give me headaches. KANER BETTER NOT KEEP THOSE GIRLS AROUND FOR LONG.

And Adam better like one of the contestants so he's not bummed out when Kaner and Delaney get it on. Because they so will. MORE SOON!

I am freaking in love with this!
The idea is amazing and i totally picture Bur like that.
Kaner not holding his liquor made my day haha. I can soo see that.

Update soon Pleaseee :)

OMG if patrick kane was the bachelor i would be the first to sign up for the show! lol

Oh geez! I wonder if Pat is really going to help Adam with his girl troubles.

This story is great! I sense much hilarity between Adam and Pat in the future (And I hope I'm right!)

Great update! More soon??

I love how Adam is going to be hosting this show; I can't wait to see how it turns up.
I just can't wait to see how this whole idea turns out as well, it's such an interesting thing and I'm excited for it, and to meet the girls as well.
And I just love Adam and Patrick, too!

Burrrrr. <3
I agree with Jessica, PKane needs a bed time, he looks young enough to have one. :)

Oh poor Bur.
Shut down.
And uhhh, I actually think Kaner does need a bedtime.
Just saying...
More soon. <3

This is really great so far. Adam asking for help with the ladies love it. Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Haha this is a great update! Hope that you write more soon!!

LOL. I love Burish. Usually you expect stories to start off kind of slow for the first couple of chapters, but Burish definitely picks this one up. Patrick hasn't even met the girls yet, and I'm hooked.

Coming home from an annoying day at school and an even tougher day of hockey condition, this was the perfect thing to read, it seriously had me smiling the whole way though, forgetting about everything from earlier today. I'm jealous, Patrick's house sounds so amazing and the whole thing between Adam and Delaney made me laugh, especially after Patrick got her number. I can't wait for the next update, you've got me excited.

Alright I lied, I read it just now, lmfao.

And right off the bat, with Adam "opening the glass door to the building and walking through it, laughing as the door shut too quickly before Patrick could get through it, too, causing Patrick to run right into it." LMFAO. Such a Kaner move.

ADAM IS GOING TO HOST AND NARRATE THE SHOW.

OMFG. This is going to be amazing. LMFAO

“Yes, let’s talk a little about me,” Adam said with a grin on his face. Already, Erin! I love Adam Burish.

Sorry to Kaner, but if this ends up being an Adam vs Patrick type thing, I am Team Bur ALL THE WAY.

HAHHAHAHHAHA HE PUSHED KANER OFF HIS CHAIR??? Omg, why is Adam so mean to PKane in this story?? Lmfao, not that I don't love it or anything, lol!

Oh God. I can't wait for more. Legit.

I like where this story is going.

I. Love. Patrick. Kane.

This is going to be great! I hope the rest of it's as funny as this chapter was!!

I love this. My friends force me to watch the Bachelor, so a dating show hosted by Adam Burish? The closest you can get in my books to perfect. This has epic written all over it.

That was hilarious, I like that plot, it's very unique. I can't wait for the next chapter