Undream the Echoes - Comments

this story is simply amazing.
i have no words in describing how touched i was by this story.
again, you're an incredible writer.

cannot wait for the next update. =D

i am not a freak.

im just a silent reader.

that last chapter was so beautiful and so sad all at the same time. Your note about silent readers was a relief.. sorry i'm one of 'em :D

Wow. The way you described the airport was beautiful. I sorta think that no one would really pay that much attention to the people around them but at the same time you were able to bring it back to Liam and Elle in a marvelous manner.

I got a little teary eyed, in was so touching.

m o r e s o o n p l e a s e

this story.. *sigh* this story is going to make me cry because i am already really attached to liam and elle.. ugh.. i don't want anything bad to happen to them!

-hangs head-

I am asilent lazy reader.
I accept it, but I love your story enough to comment it.
And those big letters sort of had me freaked.
Call me paranoid if you wish, I was just hoping, I didn't get killed by a clown at 1:51 a.m. for not commenting or something. (:

My heart goes out to Elle, even though she's fictional.
The entire time I was reading the chapter, I felt like I was just standing next to her, watching everything happen. That was a really intense chapter. The way you described everything was so powerful. I loved it.

chapter 9 was amazing. i got a little teary eyed and that rarely happens. i love this story!

I love everything you write, they're all so fantastic!

Ps. I was (stalking-ly) randomly reading the comments above and I read one about Liam dying and that also reminded me, that in the 'present' Liam is dying. So wow that makes it even sad-er. So yeah, I hope we get a lot of flashbacks before we are forced back in to the reality of the present.

I absolutely love this story.
But how many times have you heard that one before?
It's incredible, I love Liam and Elle.

Oh by the way, you said something about a song for them, I would suggest Konstantine by Something Corporate

-new reader, teehee-

First off, I'd like to say this this is absolutely brilliant. And I don't usually say that, so that's something. You write beautifully :D

More soon?

Loved.
I can't wait to read more of this.

This is my second comment in a row. Creepy.

But anyways...

This was so heartbreaking, and it brought up a lot of memories about my brothers going off to war. Well, that's not really important and doesn't have anything to do with your story.

The sunrise begins my sorrow.

That's so sorrowful and beautiful at the same time.

I see the army wives and I think, I am you. We are the same.

I think that's really powerful, and so true.

I wonder what he looks like with his hair that short. I wonder if he’ll look like a different person.

Something about that line is sad in a way. I don't know how...it just is.

I am losing the man I know now, the man I am in love with, the man I have married. The thought is just as frightening as it is sad.

It's sad but kind of true. I think they lose a little bit of themselves over there.

And then he’s gone. I am alone.

How sad is that? :/

You captured all of her emotions so...right. I could totally relate to how she was feeling and it was like I was right there, the whole time - watching with her.

I love this.

Haha.

I saw the chapter title and I was like, "Hmm, I wonder what this one is about..."

But I was suprised to find it wasn't just about that. :D

This chapter had me laughing to myself. Liam is so awesome. Why can't he be real?
I just love how Elle tells him she's sick without even telling him who she is.

And I love how Elle is finally opening up to him, and usually she's so tough. It's cool to see a different side of her.

Gosh. It's going to be so sad in the end, because I know he's dying. I don't even want to think about it. :/

I’ve always loved vintage: its eternal beauty has always left me mystified, and have always left me wondering how humans can be mortal and yet the things we create can be immortal.

I loved that line.

Pineapple Express kicks ass. So does Juno, though.

As far as a song goes for them, I kind of thought about "From Where You Are," by Lifehouse. It kind of reminded me of in the beginning, when Liam was going to be deployed. But I'll try and think of some others. :)

Songs?

I'm not sure about the fit, but She by Parachute has lately been a favorite of mine.

Great chapter.

I love this story. I wish all boys were like Liam. <3

aww. liam is, like, the cutest boyfriend ever.
i love this story so freakin' much.
as for the songs though, i have no idea.

i love this story.

I love how he names his planes.

Great, like usual:]