Undream the Echoes - Comments

I have just finished reading The Time Travelers Wife, and I really enjoyed it and cried as well.
This sounds good, it reminds me highly of Time Travelers Wife.
Its very well written as all your stuff is.
Can't wait to read some more.

This a bit on the sad side, but it's really good and well written.
I'm intrigued to see how it turns out. :)

Amazing.

It's different from the things you normally write, but I enjoyed it :)
The idea that there really is no concrete main character is a little hard to adapt to, but I'm sure you'll figure out a way to make it fabulous, like always. It sounds a little depressing though that's not a bad thing. Some really good stories are a little depressing.
I can't wait for the next chapter ;) Good job and happy Thanksgiving!

I think that it's touching.

And that's really saying something becuase the reader doesn't even know what exactly the main character is dying from at this point. Yet the way you tell the story creates a mood in which the reader feels sympathetic and is already mourning this character's inevitable death before we even get to know more about him.

The way you (and Towers) write really do inspire me to pay more attention in Englsh class and learn to enhance my writing skills so that could be at least half as wonderful as yours. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

I've been dying to read the Time Traveler's Wife as well, but have not been able to get my hands on a copy of the book (or the DVD for that matter..) I guess I'll just have to wait until Christmas to get it. Happy Turkey Day and please, please continue writing this.