September 2nd, 2010 at 06:10am
Look At Me - Comments
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u better update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 29th, 2010 at 08:12pm
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I absolutly adore this story! I'm bored of how in every slash theres one very small feminine and submissive bo, and one "man of the relationship". In your story theyre both like "the man of the realtionship" which makes them clash, which I think makes the story much more interesing. It's a very compelling read, especially since the characters are well developed and have a background/life besides just the slash aspect(like Sammy and Elle). I really hope you'll update soon, I can't wait!August 23rd, 2010 at 02:47am
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I agree with Rahh. on focusing more on Sammy/Leo and Sammy's feelings for Leo.
I really like this story. I just found it and I'm sad to read that it's going to go soon. I wonder how you're going to finish this. I also adore your writing style. It's one of my favorites. :)August 21st, 2010 at 12:21am -
I'll be honest and say that this is one of my favourite stories on Mibba, I don't want it to end :(
But yaknow, updates are few and far between, and I think you might have to work a bit harder on the Sammy/Leo and especially Sammy's feelings for Leo a bit more, rather than on the rathermore unecessary characters like Elle and Peter.August 20th, 2010 at 11:16pm -
I'm confused..... are they getting together, or just kisses?
but, aside from that, I friggen love it!!!!!August 20th, 2010 at 02:35pm -
I really want to see how you would end this. o_o HOT PUBLIC MAKE-OUT SESSION! XD And yaaay, she's cheating on him, so that gives Leo/Sammy more of a chance!!! But really. Update soon. <3August 20th, 2010 at 08:50am
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This was very well written. I love how you began the story and how its from a first person point of view. It really chances how the story was written and this definitely makes it better.
I'm definitely going to have to finish reading this one.
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can't wait for more:DJuly 29th, 2010 at 02:56am
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Heehee finally :D <3
It's kinda cute!
Update soon!July 27th, 2010 at 10:52pm -
I like it.
Keep up the good work!!
I hope you update soon!
XDJuly 27th, 2010 at 04:24pm -
poor sam is so confused about himselfJuly 27th, 2010 at 03:42pm
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I think Sam just liked fighting with Leo so much because then he didn't have to admit to anything like he did on the roof. Leo is one persistent bastard. It wouldn't be any fun if he wasn't though. Can't wait to find out what happens next! <3July 27th, 2010 at 01:40pm
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:OO
iloveit [:July 27th, 2010 at 09:17am -
heh. he obviously likes fighting... well, i LOVEE it :DJuly 18th, 2010 at 12:18am
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
Please update sooooon ? :D
Leo can be a bit of a dick, to be honest with youu..
and Sam.. I love Sam, but he likes to fight and pretends to be a bit of a homophobe a little too much, I think. -_-
Still love this <33333July 15th, 2010 at 07:47am -
O.O Who is itttt???? I'm excited!!! Update soon pwease!July 15th, 2010 at 05:30am
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LEONARDO!
LEONARDO!
I know that's Leo's name... but it's making me twitch. Leonaaaaardo.
"“Oo,” Leo said mockingly. “I think I hit a few buttons there.”
Teeth clenched, I pushed Peter aside and stepped into Leo’s personal space. “You have no idea.”"
You needa space those.
And ooooo! They lied! and you did too. You said you described Sasha's hair. You only described his green eyes. You lied. Ha. >w<July 15th, 2010 at 04:46am -
Oh, I forgot to ask. Are you some kind of mind reader? Because I was thinking of this story earlier today. It was a really nice surprise since I was in the mood to read this.July 15th, 2010 at 03:24am
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Sammy does just seem to have one thing after another happen to him. Good thing Peter and Leo had his back on this one. I think Leo enjoys pushing Sam's buttons a little too much. Thanks for the update, hope there's more soon! <3July 15th, 2010 at 03:21am
I'm just wondering how this going to turn out....