Have Kids, Then We'll Talk - Comments

I love these kids too! :]
Great update here.

i lovee it soo bad

WOO Dick is awesome XD I love how the chapter came together for you Yeya! And thank you for posting it ^.^ It was amazing work *bows*

Amazing chapter! Oh my god! I can't wait to read more of it. You guys don't know how much I love this story.

Haha. Awesome. As always. :mrgreen:

Fan-fricken-tastic.
You guy's deserve a medal for this I swear.
This is such an amazing story, and I can't believe only 8 stars, I think we need 2 more ;], anyhow.
You've captured the feelings, the emotions, and the lives in each chapter, they look complicated, but if you read into it deep enough it's easy to understand what these kids would be going through.
neglect.

*Hands over "Best Concept and most awesome people Award*
Again, fantastic story. <3

I wish I commented more on this story
but I seem to be left speechless after each update.
(in a good way, don't worry)

All the kids in the story lead life alot like their washed up parents do. It's believeable, yet not, to think the adults never really grew up.
there's just something about this story that keeps me reading and I'm not exactly sure what it is
I mean, everyone who contribtues to this is a great writer, and multiple author stories are hard to pull off well. You just do...
I guess this story just humanizes the characters so well that you have to keep reading, because it reads more like an autobiography than fiction

A-MAZING. As always. :)

AHH Aiden was teh mentioned! One more chapter before the chapter twos...WOOT WOOT. Great update meh love <333 No matter what you say.

This was an amazing update! I just love how you could see what she was seeing. I hope to read more soon.

I loved this update. It was awesome!

Amazing chapter, like always.

Tre the Cool.:

I don't know how many times I've said this, but this is probably my favorite story on here. It's fuckin amazing.

Melvyn. :

tbvh, that pwned my socks right off me
: D

i enjoy this story more than i enjoy bugging Shannon about Melvyn
: D

<3

lmfao and just to tell you guys something, she REALLY likes bugging me about that.

So she must enjoy this story A LOT.

she totally quoted me 8)

rofl

anywayss, yeah, this story rocks my socks : D

Updated with Shay's chapter.

Wow, you have an incredible story on here.
The group of writers who created this story have some incredible talent.

I love how this is all famous people's children. Not just from one band, but all across the board. And each child has their own problem. Some of them don't like being famous, and some bask in their parent(s)' glory. Some are "good" children, and some are drunk troublemakers. They are mostly in the same situation, but they are anything but similar.

It's a very unique story (other than the other one that is on here like this, of course, although this one was here first) with a great plot and wonderfully original characters.

I just have to say this: the fact that Pete Wentz's kid's name is Dick is freaking hilarious. XD

It's written beautifully, each child having their own outlook and personality, thanks to the different writers, and if flows perfectly. All-in-all, it is one of the best stories I've read yet. By the way, I'm having trouble coming up with adjectives to describe how fantastic this really is.

I'm subscribing.
Hope to see more from you soon.
xoxo

Amazing story here

Love the dynamic of the characters and the chilling parallel their personalities run with some real life people make it that much more great. And from coming from different writers, how it blends so well together is nothing short of fantastic.

Wonderful job.

Again, another fantastic, awesome, [insert very big word describing your story here] :]
I love it!
Ah Ryan. How fun, haha.

I love this story so much! I love how you can see into each one of their lives. I could see everything that was written. Keep it up.

I don't know how many times I've said this, but this is probably my favorite story on here. It's fuckin amazing.

Melvyn. :

tbvh, that pwned my socks right off me
: D

i enjoy this story more than i enjoy bugging Shannon about Melvyn
: D

<3

lmfao and just to tell you guys something, she REALLY likes bugging me about that.

So she must enjoy this story A LOT.

tbvh, that pwned my socks right off me
: D

i enjoy this story more than i enjoy bugging Shannon about Melvyn
: D

<3