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  • dreamboat.

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    *is a new reader*

    i love this story, you guys are amazing writers
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    November 22nd, 2007 at 08:13am
  • Tre the Cool.

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    Amazing chapter, as always.
    November 22nd, 2007 at 06:16am
  • the Wizard

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    this is the fucking sexiest story ever.
    dru wrote an awesome summary.
    each character is beautifully constructed.
    and i just adore the prose.

    ...*squeals*
    November 22nd, 2007 at 01:32am
  • z3ez

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    I love how you guys capture the emotion so well,
    not many writers can do that. =]
    November 22nd, 2007 at 12:04am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Omg! I love this story! All the authors are just so awesome! I hope to read more soon.
    November 21st, 2007 at 07:19am
  • z3ez

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    I just read the whole thing and omg this is amazing,
    all the authors are just wonderful.
    November 21st, 2007 at 05:53am
  • B---

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    Baaah both updates [Cassie's and Jared's] were fucking amazing. I can't say anything else really - I absolutely loved them both, and I can't wait for more!
    November 21st, 2007 at 05:13am
  • TeaCakeLady

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    Jared <3
    This was another amazing chapter!
    Well done :]
    November 20th, 2007 at 01:52pm
  • TeaCakeLady

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    Excellent update!
    Brilliant chapter. :]
    November 19th, 2007 at 02:56am
  • Miss Stroup

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    That was a really cute chapter.
    =]
    November 18th, 2007 at 08:47pm
  • Tre the Cool.

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    Aww!

    That was such a nice chapter.

    This is probably my favorite story on here. :)
    November 18th, 2007 at 08:34pm
  • Chemical Heart.

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    Okay, so here's my comment for Cass' chapter. A chapter which I have been anxiously waiting for...for about forever!

    To be honest, I've never read your style before Sruti- but I like it! I loved how she was picturing herself with Dan, it made me go "Awwww."

    There was two other parts I loved!

    My mind has slowed down a bit, but I’m already bouncing again as I ring Charlie’s doorbell. She’s at the door, armed with credit cards.

    “Madie’s grounded,” she says with a smirk.

    I smirk right back. “My mom won’t be back until midnight.”
    That was so Charlie. :lmfao And it just reminded me of the Trio. xD

    Then this line; And like something out of a spy novel, she simply falls out of the window and into my arms. Like a hyperactive feather.
    A hyperactive feather? Probably the BEST way to describe Madie ever.

    Cass has anger issues. xD
    November 18th, 2007 at 06:05pm
  • B---

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    I love Madie. I can kinda imagine Mikey being like that, too. Again, I'm rubbish at reviews, but all I'll say is that I love it, and I can't wait to read more!
    October 29th, 2007 at 07:04pm
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Omg! I just love this story! It's so awesome! I can't wait for more.
    October 26th, 2007 at 06:48am
  • Miss Stroup

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    Wow. I love this.
    So much.

    I already have Dick's myspace...now I need to add the rest.

    and I absolutely can not wait for more. =]
    October 25th, 2007 at 11:05am
  • The Way

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    You know how much I loved that chapter Chel. :XD

    But why did Jay sound so... preppy? :lmfao
    October 24th, 2007 at 06:25pm
  • space cadet glow.

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    Woo, it took way too long for me to post and no one cares because I don't know any of you personally. Anywayyyy.

    I am freaking loving this. The whole concept of rockstar's kids has been done time and time again, but this has been pulled off to such an extent that it pretty much blows all those other cliche fics out of the water. So many fantastic writers working on one story, it's almost difficult to fathom.
    And the characters.
    -faints-
    There's such a range between them, some are complete polar opposites, but they all manage to have something in common. Ooh, the conflict. -rubs hands together- I can't wait.
    Everyone has managed to pull off their own character with a surprisingly unique touch to all of them [considering there's so many, it's an amazing feat really.]
    I love the idea of Dan's, er...eccentricicity. Is that a word? It doesn't look quite right.
    And it's probably just the inner slash lover inside me rearing up, but I started 'aww'ing insanely when he and Aiden cuddled.
    Omg there's so much I haven't covered I feel REALLY bad for not being able to remember half of it. x.x
    This fic is so wrought with conflict just waiting to happen...
    So brilliant.
    Man, I'm sorry that I couldn't really leave a worthy review. I just can't seem to gather all my thoughts together. There's so much to comment on, it's all just so fucking fantastic.
    Forgive the sucky review please.
    October 24th, 2007 at 02:26pm
  • Tre the Cool.

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    Overprotective parents. Jeez I know what that's like...

    Awesome chapter. I love this story.
    October 24th, 2007 at 04:28am
  • Laces For Hanging.

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    Hmm, maybe Madie should listen to her parents..they are supposed to know best after all...

    Ah, fuck it. Teenage rebellion really makes a story tick :D
    October 24th, 2007 at 04:03am
  • Laces For Hanging.

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    Ohh...Daiden?? Nice...

    You should totally write some Daiden after this story ends...Which will be a very sad day...*sniffs*

    Aweseom chapter :):) I love the descriptions and Dan's twitching...it's so cute!!

    debbie x
    October 24th, 2007 at 02:13am
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