Aurora - Comments

This story is insanely amazing. I love it! Keep writing, its brilliant

You're also one of the best writers I've seen in this dinky little website. It's kind of refreshing to read this after seeing every story about the jonas brothers or fanfic slashes written by twelve year olds
:)

Really wonderful chapter. I like how you describe the how the gate is suppose to protect the forest, and how the Keeper 'forgets' that humans have short legs.

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I think how you describe all the 'magical' things is what is the best. And I really love the whole thing about the 'gate' and how it's supposed to protect the forest from humans. Because it's so true, and it just ties in nicely with the rest of the story.

And I really like Lourdes because she scares me, and I know I'm going to be scared of her dad, and it's just a story worth waiting for. YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE WRITER, EMILY!! Just thought I'd tell you...again.

Ah! I'm so glad you updated. I kinda squealed when I went on your profile page and saw that you had updated. Um, that's not creepy at all. :D

Oh man. This was so awesome I have to think of something that I could say to sum up how much I loved this chapter.

First of all, I felt like I was there with them, and I could imagine the gate, just from how you described it. I feel kinda bad for Adrian now; his mother died and he has all of these duties forced upon him. And aw, poor Aurora. Gosh, that last line was so sad.

That Gate Keeper sounded freaky, man. Haha. I'm dying to know about Aurora's crown now!

I love this story; I can't wait for more!
By the way, just a little comment on the pronunciation of one of the names...Niamh is actually pronounced like Nee-ve. It's Irish, and some Irish names are weird like that. My cousin's name is Niamh, and my other cousin's name is Siobhan, which is pronounced like Sha-vahn. I didn't know if you already knew this. Keep writing (:

Usually I can go on for quite a bit with how much I like certain parts of a story, but to say something is good, another part has to be less good. That's not going to wok here. This is absolutely magical! Everything about it is beautifully extraordinary and supremely excellent. Voice, description, syntax, figurative language, characters, plot; everything works together in a beauiful harmony that just pulls you in and will not let go. I don't know what else there is to be said. Magnificent. Purely and beautifully magnificent. I so wish I was Aurora.

Usually I can go on for quite a bit with how much I like certain parts of a story, but to say something is good, another part has to be less good. That's not going to wok here. This is absolutely magical! Everything about it is beautifully extraordinary and supremely excellent. Voice, description, syntax, figurative language, characters, plot; everything works together in a beauiful harmony that just pulls you in and will not let go. I don't know what else there is to be said. Magnificent. Purely and beautifully magnificent. I so wish I was Aurora.

When Adrian was first introduced, I didn't think I'd like him very much. But as the story progresses, he's increasingly... Sexy? Haha, I don't know, but I like where this is going. I love this story to bits; it's probably my favorite thing you've written thus far. It makes me happy when skies are gray. :)

I'm so glad you didn't give up on Aurora.
I would have been very sad.
Adrian is amazing. He sounds wonderful, even though there's something weird about him. I don't think he really likes Lourdes. At least, I'm hoping he doesn't, haha.
I can't wait for the next update!

I really like this world you created. I mean, the way it sounds so concrete makes me feel like it was totally a book before. I really love your attention for details, your dialogue, and you ability to create these things that don't look stupid and silly.

Even if you are Luna Lovegood, its excellent!

Ah!

I am sooo freaking excited about the journey. I'm all late on commenting but I enjoyed reading two updates. They both were amazing. I was completely blown away and did not expect any of that to happen... I have this nervous feeling about Lourdes. Eh, I don't like her.

There are really a lot of controlling and manipulative (to say the least) girls in this story, haha.

I hadn't realized this before, but King Randulf was saying goodbye to his son, not sure if ever might return.

I think you meant something like not sure if he ever might return. I just happened to notice that, at the end of the last chapter.

I cannot wait for the next chapter. :)

Love it! Wow, it's really rare I find such a treasure looking over the stories. Your voice is just brilliant, how each paragraph flows, and how everything makes Aurora such a person. You seem to have an amazing understanding of how people work, how they might seem one way, but their hearts tell a completely different story. Genius! And the plot is amazing, completely different from the tons of love stories you encounter on here (hoping not to offend anyone). I wanted to scream at my computer screen whenever you said chapters were just "eh" or you thought you were losing it. Hey, If I could write that well, I'd never had an excuse to stop writing. Which, by the way, if you ever try such a thing, you will be hunted down just to find a group of angry wolves and a slightly-insane reader at your doorstep. Oh yes.

Best of luck, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Don't give up on this! The characters and story are so so so soooo amazing, and you are a great author. Keep at it =)

Dog kinda freaks me out. But I like him, and that he's call "Dog".

The journey!! Yay, I am excited!! And that lady...Lourdes of the Wolves, me no like her.

Glad you were able to keep writing!!!

I'm so so so excited for their journey.
On another note I absolutely despise Lourdes...

I loooooooooooove Aurora. You write amazing. I check Mibba everyday solely just to see if you've updated :)

i love this
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This is rather amazing.

beautifully written, as always!
This is going to be amazing, i can tell.
Thanks for another wonderful chpter! Hope we get to read another update soon. :]]

Stupid Lourdes.