Aurora - Comments

Very exciting story. Very cute, and very exciting and incredibly well written. Liked very much the way it is written. I like what Adrian calls me, though. Aurora of my Heart. <--- It was just absolutely beautiful =) I loved it!!

I just read this entire story in one sitting.
This is good enough to be published. I love it.

Amazing story!
really loved it!!

I can't even possibly describe how much I loved this story. This story is even more amazing than the aurora borealis!! I really enjoyed reading it! :)

You really need to become an author. Never in my freaking life have I read something this awesome by a person who isn't a writer. I much congratulate you for this amazing work. Just to see, your chapters were pretty long, but you included everything a story needs to be perfect. Will follow your other stories when I can. To much work to do...

God, this story is epic. The storyline, plot, characters are developed and written to perfection. I always expect something great from you, but this story is simply breathtaking. When reading the title, I expected a more standard storyline: girl meets guy and they fall in love in everyday planet Earth. Here I am, having just read the whole story. I'm speechless.

Emily, you are mind-blowingly gifted. I'd say talented, but this story takes more than talent alone to write. It's not just the characters that make me appreciate this story so much, it's the very world you have created. This is by far the most original story I've read-- plot, character, storyline, you name it.

Aurora of my Heart<3

This turned out lovely :)

I liked the ending, because of how bittersweet it was.

It would've been unrealistic to hope that she would be happy with everything that happened,
because that's not the Aurora that we know. It's cool how you brought in Artemis, Huntress of the Moon as well. That was a smart reference :)

WELL DONE!

Ah. Happy sigh. So wonderful. : ]

Noo! I'm gonna cry now that it's finished! but I loved the end: Rosalyn as the ruler of Lunarenstein, Magdalena and Stefan and Aurora and Adrian... I love happy endings!! = D

Thank you! Thank you a million times over! This is an amazing story & I've loved every word & chapter along the way. Thank you so much for your time & your willingness to share with us.

I like what Adrian calls me, though. Aurora of my Heart.
I too loved that sentence and the last one when she claims that she is happy. I couldn't imagine a better ending! Many people may say that happy endings are overrated, but they are not. Definitely not. Reading this story has been one of the best decisions I've ever made. Your words, your sentences and your wilder than wild imagination makes reading worth while.

I'll just say the same thing I said before: I just wish that the books they force us to read at school were half as good as the ones you write. I have to say, I hate waiting for a story to end. I dread having to check every day for an update, but Aurora was worth it. Your writing is worth it and I'm not saying this to sound nice. I really mean it.

And I checked out your two new stories and I subscribed (although I have no idea what they will be about I know that if you write them, the are bound to be awesome).
Just keep up the good work, because I'm loving it. :)

i cant even-

i don't-

LKSIDJLSGBSEORHTTOWE I'M SO SAD BUT SO HAPPYYY

no lie, this is THE best story you have ever written. better than SOTW, better than WWB, and well, i can't really say if it's better than pale moon because i have yet to see that in its entirety, but holy mother of tom cruise, i didn't ever want to stop reading this story. and now that it't over, i find myself at a loss for words. hence the gibberish up there ^ ^

so congratulations, you're an emotion-manipulating genius. and i mean that in the greatest way possible.

I like what Adrian calls me, though. Aurora of my Heart. <- I truly loved that one bit. This is a beautiful story, to say the least - all of your stories are extraordinary. I loved every single word in it, honestly.

Chapter Eighteen:

In Chapter Eighteen, when Aurora screams ‘Enough!’ at Adrian and the Queen of Death, it reminded me of the Walt Whitman quote, ‘I exist as I am; that is enough.’ Obviously, Aurora is not feeling that way at the moment, but I imagine she begins to grasp the concept of ‘being enough’ for oneself...

‘...but my eyelids felt like lead...’ Phew, don’t I know how you feel, Aurora. When someone has Absence Seizures, if you’re sleeping you become paralyzed and so you can’t move and whenever I’m sleeping and having an Absence Seizure, all I can think about is how heavy my eyes are and how I wish I could see. /cool story bro

Sometimes I think amnesia would be such a beauty to come about (especially with the kind of memory I have) but then I read chapters such as [Chapter Eighteen] or see something on the news, etcetera and I realize that it would be atrocious. I’m always talking about how much I hate remembering everything (I literally remember what my Pre-K teachers husband’s breath smelt like -.-) but I can’t imagine coming back into life not remember the beauty and morbidity of things and people and especially myself.

Anyway! In a way, I wasn’t expecting her to go back but at the same time, you’ve introduced Aurora as such a realistic character that it’s plausible. A lot of people would rather go back in time and never have experienced such turmoil, rather than continuing on with it... so, it makes sense and I don’t hate her.

Chapter Nineteen:

Personally, I think love is worth battling for and while I’ve never been in love nor do I love a lot of people (five at the most, as guesstimate), I think Aurora will fight for it... I’m only at the beginning fold of the chapter so I hope I’m right, whoooooooo.

Also, very cool that Magdalena is getting married! Awesome possum (first grade moment, ignore me)! I think it’s cute... especially set in the (pseudo-unknown) timeline so it makes it that much more realistic. I really, really, really am against people at that age getting married these days but they are not in ‘these days’ so she is excused. :3

Oh! Oh! Oh! Something I was just thinking: I wonder if Adrian remembers...

‘...want to see how he's faring.’ I read that sentence as ‘how he’s farting.’ Lmfao.

Oh dude, I was out and about the other day and I saw this girl that looked so much like the description of Aurora. She had tan skin that was slightly darker than the Italian/olive complex some people have and her hair was an incredibly white blonde (and you could tell that it was natural) and her eyes were a light, light, light gray. She was beautiful.

Oh! Another thing I was wondering: even though Aurora doesn’t exactly remember all that previously happened, is she still a virgin? Like, is her hymen forever broken or did go back to being intact? ._.

Chapter Twenty:

Okay, I’m going to listen to Howl while I’m reading this chapter!

She doesn’t fully forget. It’s like, she’s wiped of the memories she has with people but the longing to be where she belongs is still there. It’s almost like sleeping in the wrong bed and all the while you just know that you’re not in the right place and finally, once you get home to your own bed everything is right again...

Oh my god, Emily, I totally was not expecting that! Whoa! I have nothing to say, I’m in shock and just wow, wow, wow. That was seriously an unexpected twist. Actually, I think that’s the first time I’ve ever been caught off-guard with anyone’s story ⎯ because so many people, online and offline, write so predictably.

Whoo!

Chapter Twenty-One:

Oh hey, did the people that live on the moon have no sun?

I know this is so far-off, but it would be interesting if you made a sequel or ‘sister story’ to Aurora about Missy and her life on the moon... I think it would be quite the interesting read.

Anyway, that was exciting and a beautiful read! There is honestly nothing I can say, because this is too lovely for words.

AWE. I'm so sad this story is over. But it was wonderful to read anyhow.

beautfiful. beautiful.
Lol :D [im wishing that this will have a sequel, but thats just me being selfish.]
loved it, through and through.

That was an amazing ending!
It was very realistic,not everything was perfect but that's how life is
I loved loved loved it
x

Now I'm gonna have to be mournful for the rest of the day... This has been one of my absolute favorite stories, and I'm sad to see it end. The ending works, but what actually happened with the moon queen, and Delphine, and such is a bit confusing... Delphine was fear, and Niamh was her daughter, and Aurora locked Delphine in a tower? The same tower the Moon Queen was in I suppose... And breaking the enchantment? How did that work?

Really though, I'm just making excuses for why you could write more... I really do love it. Present tense is a little disconcerting, but I see why you used it. I really am sad to see this end... *sniffle*

This story was amazing. I really am going to miss it.