Playing With Fire - Comments

ooh a sequel please!

This chapter was so sweet. I'm glad that everyone made it through okay. Well, except for Michael, I feel bad for that happening, but still. I think a sequel would be awesome. Does that mean that this story is coming to a close? Again, I'm really enjoying this story. I love it!

I didn't think that this was awkward at all, but I can see where you're coming from with worrying that it would be. I hate writing scenes like that myself. I really liked this chapter. All her thoughts seemed so real. i felt sorry for both her and Nick, because he seemed to be in as much pain as she was, just emotional instead of physical. This really is one of the best stories I've read so far. I can't wait to read more!

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AWWWW

I'm sooo happy that they r both alive!!!!

I love Dr. Bailey!!!!! Haha, really good, glad she's not dead!

OhMyGoshhh. Most amazing update so far. The pure detail you put into the pain she felt was absolutely stunning. It was poetry, really. I loved it, this update showcases your true talent. Amazing job.

Awesome! This was really good. It was very intense as well. The only thing that I would have to say negatively about this is that the descriptions are a bit long and wordy in some parts of this chapter, but I guess that's only a matter of opinion. But I am really enjoying thsi story. I can't wait to read more!

few more days?!
i'm in tears here; I can't wait a few days!
please let them all be okay. :(

OH MY GOD! that was the most intense thing I have ever read ever. Ok well maybe not, but it's pretty darn close. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Glad to hear you're feeling better. :) What incredible updates. I can't even explain how anxious I am to find out if everyone is going to be okay. Wow. Amazing.

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OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!

That was the biggest cliffhanger ever!!!
Update as soon as you can...(without rushing) I need to know what happens.

please tell me she's going to be OK! and layla, too. they need to live happily ever after with nick and the rest of the family cause she's been through so much. ='[

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
DONt DIE
PLZ

Oh my god, you can't leave me hanging there, please update soon.

I just felt the car crash comin, no joke.

Finally a new chapter and you have to end it with a cliff hanger? That's not fair! Haha, but really, I am still loving this, and I will no matter how long the gaps are in between. Honestly, the only thing that comes to my head for comments for this story are positive. Your characters are developing very well. I can't wait to see what happens next!