Cheated Hearts - Comments

that was cruel of harper. she was just talking about how she hated double standards ("promiscuity doesn't deserve glory") and then she did exactly what she said she hated.
i still love keaton though :)

Awww poor Keaton. ):
That sucks.
Stupid Josh.
Why is Harper doing this to him?
Even though Harper led Keaton on, I think it was pretty awesome of her to tell off that man with the ugly orange suit. People get crazy during morning coffee runs. Sighs.

Wow. I did not see that one coming.
Poor Keaton ):
That was so not fair to him.
Great twist, though. :)

i really like this and i think keaton is adorable
: )

I love your new story and can't wait to read more.:D

I have a few things to tell you
A) I am so sorry for not commenting lately, I've just had a reeeeeeeeeeally bad case of the lazies (case in point: having to read 20 chapters of a book for English in three days)
B) I love love looooove Cheating Hearts! I can tell this is going to be an amazing story.
C) I asked the question on formspring about what the characters looked like, and after I read "Good question." I basically danced around my room for a good 5 minutes because I never have good questions haha

Harper just cracks me up.

"Holy shit, did you rob a bank?"
Favorite line of this chapter. Keaton is probably one of my favorite guy characters. He's so real and funny.

We spent the next two hours going through the entire calendar because I was born on December 31st.
Haha, that was very clever :)

Fantabulous job, I loved it.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

The update was amazing haha I loved how you did his birthday!

This is going to be good, I can already tell. It sort of reminds me of (500) Days of Summer. I'm not entirely sure why.
Also, I really love "maybe you can be happy, instead of being great." That's a pretty interesting statement.

This story is going to be awesome!

I love this already! And Keaton abd myself share the same birthday! hahaha. Keep it up, J. You're such a wonderfull author and I love reading you're work. :]

His eyes called me a bitch, mine called him a motherfucker.

HA. I loved that. I thought I was the only one who secretly called people names inside my head when I just met them. :D

I love the name Harper.

"Your ass will be fine!" she said a little too loudly with so much happiness that tears had formed in her sage eyes.

Yeah, that made me laugh too. Haha, I love Keaton.

She stared at me eagerly, "I need you," she whispered.

Oh God...haha. What a way to make a first impression.

"You are the most wonderful-" I read my lines off the palm of my hand –" gorgeous bitch on the planet. I want you, " I struggled with her smudged handwriting, "...to have my babies," I finished monotonously; I couldn't believe I had said that.

:D This is pretty hilarious.

I love this, really, I do. Keaton is pretty awesome, and so is Harper. :)

really loved this :D please keep writing! I'm a new reader, and I just subscribe

I'm liking all the updates haha. This story is amazing so far, I love it! Keaton is awesome.

Oh my, I was reading the third chap. (which I loved by the way) and when I saw the name Reagan, my jaw dropped. My little sister's name is Reagan... except she's got an e at the end, but still, it was so funny.

But keep going with your story, gosh, I'm surprised that you don't have more comments on this already, you're such a great writer and everything.

So I just watched 500 Days of Summer and in my head Harper looks just like Summer except with red hair and a lot less bitchy. Still deciding what Keaton should look like, though.

Yeah, remember how I said I loved Keaton?
Yep, I love him even more now.
And Harper, gosh she's so funny :) Her sister and her sister's boyfriend are pretty rad too.
I love the little dare. It was a really cool way to meet. :D
With every chapter the story gets more and more interesting and amazing.
Update soon, pretty please.

I. am. stoked.
Seriously. This story has already become fabulous even though there's only two chapters so far.
I love Keaton. He's so real. :) And Keaton is a pretty cool name.
I like his co-workers. Beatrix is also a cool name.
I can't wait for the next update :)

Ahhh I love it!

oh my god you updated alreadyyyy :)
Haha I love Keaton. He's so angry but we know it's from fear. His insecurities make him real.
I didn't beat him up in my mind. THIS IS A GREAT LINE.

She was Caroline. I could get used to working with pretty girls. Caroline is my name so I'm going to assume you based her off of me of course :)

His eyes called me a bitch, I called him a motherfucker.
Yeah I'm just quoting everything because it's so awesome.