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  • BlackQueen

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    love the updates.
    October 30th, 2007 at 12:22am
  • BlackQueen

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    I want more. Man that was close. I wonder what her ex is going to do.
    October 29th, 2007 at 10:31pm
  • Summer_Rain

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    Ok... that always happens to me, when I start reading a cool history is almost ended ¬¬

    OMG this history is so beautiful, the characters seem so real (and finaly someting is not a fanfiction!). I think that is not the end, I wish it isn't! I felt so close to the characters just as they were real and i was living around as beeing a silent ghost

    I specially liked Seth and William. Seth was cold in the outside and warm in the inside, he was wise and knew when to fight or not and when to stand for others, and had his goals in life just as William, he was an intelligent one too, and wanted to stand up and be something more, he wanted to have a different future.

    One of the best historys I've ever read!

    Keep it going up! (BTW the last chapters almost made me cry, I liked Elle so much)
    October 28th, 2007 at 10:53pm
  • mollyannamusic

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    oh my god, this is amazing.
    xoxo
    Molly
    October 28th, 2007 at 08:20am
  • Malixx

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    Hey. I just read this story today and I thought it was really interesting to read. In fact, it's probably the best story I've ever read on Mibba. The characters are so emotional and actually human compared to other stories and their characters. I'm trying not to sound too much like a suck-up, but your writing is inspiring me to put more thought into what I write (so I don't make my characters out to be inhuman, emotionless, and bland). You are a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. : )
    October 28th, 2007 at 04:19am
  • mibbba

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    xXDemolitionxLoserXx:
    I'm guessing that's the end.
    I dont think thats the end. Is it?

    They were great chapters Sam. And I do have some comments (a lot of comments actually) but I cant post them here.
    October 27th, 2007 at 11:03pm
  • sailor emo

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    like everyone else said there so sad and cryful

    but what made you think of this story? i mean really what made you think i want to right an amazing story were the most unstable charactor goes on a killing spree and kill's 2 characters??

    anywho

    xoxo
    sailor emo
    October 27th, 2007 at 03:34pm
  • cuntmuffin

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    Oh my fucking god.
    I actually cried reading about the shooting
    Poor seth =[ I feel so bad for him
    You're an amazing writer. You acurately protray each and every characters perspective, making this a unique writing
    Keep up the great job
    I look foward to updates
    October 27th, 2007 at 11:53am
  • the dream maker.

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    Wow. those last few chapters were so emotional...poor Seth, I didn't want Elle to die. They seemed like such a good couple. Really great story, though. I recced this in the Pimping and Reccing thread, I wonder if anyone else saw it.
    October 27th, 2007 at 10:27am
  • Rach.

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    PS:
    SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

    and if you do make a sequel...

    PM PM PM PM PM.

    :D

    I'm trying to make everyone read this.
    October 27th, 2007 at 10:23am
  • Rach.

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    I.
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    Sobbing.

    D:
    words can't describe what I feel for this story. It's amazing.

    I'm guessing that's the end.

    Hey, publish it, and if you ever need a director for a movie, give me a call.

    XD or i can act.
    XD

    wait, why am I putting smily faces?

    That was the best ending ever... ever.
    October 27th, 2007 at 07:32am
  • fall-from-a-star

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    ive read up to chapter 19 and its awesome!!!

    your an extremley talented writer!!!

    keep up the great work!!

    Rosh
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    October 27th, 2007 at 05:28am
  • Cassie Ainsworth.

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    oh my god... those last chapters were so
    intense and emotional. I cried. Seriously.

    You're amazing at what you do.
    October 27th, 2007 at 05:11am
  • BlackQueen

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    okay now i'm crying.
    October 27th, 2007 at 04:57am
  • BlackQueen

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    Awe man you are a master at updating. if I was in college and didn't have to check my e-mail so much I would miss the updates. go work man.
    October 27th, 2007 at 04:40am
  • the dream maker.

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    Ooh, what's James going to do...suspense.

    Da dun dun!

    Ha, anyways, good update. You update super fast, I wish I could do that. Every chapter is really good, keep up the good work.
    October 27th, 2007 at 04:29am
  • Gwenny...Goregous!!

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    wow...that was a pretty intense update. It made me almost cry!!!!! [in case u don't know i mean all the shooting updates]
    i didn't see Elle's death coming..wow. im still in shock lol..!!!!
    AMAZING THO!
    October 27th, 2007 at 04:25am
  • BlackQueen

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    No not Elle, let them bring her back. let her live. no!!! awe man this story is deep. oh my.
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:58am
  • the dream maker.

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    Wow, intense chapters...but damn it, that made me cry...poor Seth...
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:27am
  • BlackQueen

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    Oh my gosh! man the chapetrs are intense. update
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:05am