Ok... that always happens to me, when I start reading a cool history is almost ended ¬¬
OMG this history is so beautiful, the characters seem so real (and finaly someting is not a fanfiction!). I think that is not the end, I wish it isn't! I felt so close to the characters just as they were real and i was living around as beeing a silent ghost
I specially liked Seth and William. Seth was cold in the outside and warm in the inside, he was wise and knew when to fight or not and when to stand for others, and had his goals in life just as William, he was an intelligent one too, and wanted to stand up and be something more, he wanted to have a different future.
One of the best historys I've ever read!
Keep it going up! (BTW the last chapters almost made me cry, I liked Elle so much)
Hey. I just read this story today and I thought it was really interesting to read. In fact, it's probably the best story I've ever read on Mibba. The characters are so emotional and actually human compared to other stories and their characters. I'm trying not to sound too much like a suck-up, but your writing is inspiring me to put more thought into what I write (so I don't make my characters out to be inhuman, emotionless, and bland). You are a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. : )
but what made you think of this story? i mean really what made you think i want to right an amazing story were the most unstable charactor goes on a killing spree and kill's 2 characters??
Oh my fucking god. I actually cried reading about the shooting Poor seth =[ I feel so bad for him You're an amazing writer. You acurately protray each and every characters perspective, making this a unique writing Keep up the great job I look foward to updates
Wow. those last few chapters were so emotional...poor Seth, I didn't want Elle to die. They seemed like such a good couple. Really great story, though. I recced this in the Pimping and Reccing thread, I wonder if anyone else saw it.
wow...that was a pretty intense update. It made me almost cry!!!!! [in case u don't know i mean all the shooting updates] i didn't see Elle's death coming..wow. im still in shock lol..!!!! AMAZING THO!