Over and Done - Comments

I read "Chasing chaos" and "Over and Done" yesterday and today and I absolutely love them both! I would love to see an update and how the story ends too, but after more than two years it is not that likely, is it? :( great story though! :)

love the story so far. please update. =}

eep. i havent been on here to comment but i agree with the above message, i too would LOVE to see how this story ends. XD

PLEEEEEEEEEASE update
;)

Please Please PLease update. I really want to know how this ends.

Oh my socks, I am so glad to have seen this updated. It was just so bittersweet and it truly broke my heart. This was my favourite part of the entire chapter:

Love. Him. This is a scary thought. A very real and very scary thought. Maybe the first time I’ve considered it out loud, considered the fact that of course I love him. I’ve always loved him. Loved him since the day I showed up on his doorstep, sopping wet and crying over the fight I’d had with his brother. The day he hugged me and told me to just breathe. And he instructed me not to tell anyone that he’d been so nice; didn’t wanna ruin his reputation, he’d said with a smile. A perfect Oliver smile.

It doesn’t matter though, because when I see Oliver next I am going to kiss him and apologize for acting so ridiculous all the time. He puts up with a ton of crazy on my part.
-praise baby jesse

Love. Him. This is a scary thought. A very real and very scary thought. Maybe the first time I’ve considered it out loud, considered the fact that of course I love him. I’ve always loved him. Loved him since the day I showed up on his doorstep, sopping wet and crying over the fight I’d had with his brother. The day he hugged me and told me to just breathe. And he instructed me not to tell anyone that he’d been so nice; didn’t wanna ruin his reputation, he’d said with a smile. A perfect Oliver smile.
-hehehhehehehhehhehehehhhhhjhege

Peter nodded and then smiled. “Ef a bird like yeh can love im than I suppose e probably ain’t all bad.”
-well well well I don't know what to say.

Yes I know, no Oli or Tom. But that's the point.
-sass

I'm not at all concerned about her father's heart problems. Her mom's still a loving lady though, nice to see.

loved the update, hope to see another one soon

I just fell in love with this story all over again.

i just fell back in love with this :D

I would comment on this but you didn't text me back.
~so~

so glad you updated :)

Hi! I love your story.
I found Chasing Chaos and loved it read it all
than read Over and Done!!!!
i LOVE this story and I need more Please!!!!!!!!!!

ohmygeez. i literally read Chasing Chaos and The chapters you have up for this story in about 3 days. That says something:D
you should really update soon!

omg!! I love this story! It is my favorite out of all the other ones I am reading!! Soo update soon before for I lose my damn mind ok?! lol

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...you always leave me like this. And Tom's fucking bugging the shit out of me. He needs to get junk punched.

I agree with Kaylie. Tom is driv ing me crazy and he just needs a good telling off if nothing else. I was glad he called her out, but he isn't completely a saint either. Their fighting makes me sad, but I love it when you write dramatic chapters like this.

I feel like I get pretty Anna sometimes. Mmmmmmmm. Batshit crazy.
Your little sister is batshit crazy.

I am speechless. This isn't what I was expecting when I opened this chapter, but I love it. It's about time Anna was caught out on her childish ways, but her and Tom fighting is making me sad. Haha. Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

...you always leave me like this. And Tom's fucking bugging the shit out of me. He needs to get junk punched.

finally sat down and read chapters 4-6 since i havent logged in here for so long. i love them. sooo much drama and stuff. XD