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  • cantcontainit

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    Why're you such a good writer? Just stop it. Well don't. But you know.
    February 16th, 2010 at 12:47am
  • youarehere.

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    Love the first chapter; completely hooked me, again. Poor Savannah and Oli, they're both unhappy. Can't wait until the next chapter!
    February 15th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    You already know who I'm rooting for, but anyway. Wow, the prologue was stunning. Seriously, the flow was great, the dialogue between Savannah, Tom, and Katie was awesome, and it wasn't too intense either. It was playful in some parts and I think that was great. I'm really psyched for more (I also like how you described the whole Savannah staring at Tom thing, hehe). So, more soon yeah?

    Rissa, I would make you a banner if I had Photoshop on this blasted machine... but alas, I do not. Sorry!
    February 14th, 2010 at 09:50pm
  • jaybean

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    Soooo excited for this :)
    Update soon please!
    February 14th, 2010 at 04:12pm
  • Syn_Sex

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    omg, don't tell me she'll end up with the one I think of now, because I hope it's not, becasue I'm praying it's oliver, and not a certain someone else...
    February 14th, 2010 at 01:39pm
  • rebel.at.heart.

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    Well, you already know I fucking love it.
    Update soon? <333
    February 14th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • UnderTheTableDreamin

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    I'm not sure who she ends up with. I think I'm wrong. I hope I'm not.....
    February 14th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • the 1975

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    bloody hell, i swear.
    i love this. way too much.
    February 14th, 2010 at 08:00am
  • youarehere.

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    I can't wait for this!
    I loved the ending to Chasing Chaos, but I will definatly
    be reading this one as well.
    February 9th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • FTS.brittni.

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    That was not an acceptable ending for me. I NEED to continue reading this. I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
    January 31st, 2010 at 01:24am
  • whiskeydrownedballad

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    i can't seem to let go of sav and oli.

    and i got a tad teary over the ending of chasing chaos, but can you blame me haha.

    looking forward to the first chapter when you have the chance.
    January 29th, 2010 at 02:45pm
  • Jay Lynn

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    I'm excited, and I think it's kinda weird I didn't comment the last chapter of the other story before I commented this, but oh well haha.
    Can't wait :)
    January 29th, 2010 at 08:31am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I'm super stoked for this, =)
    January 29th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • kristenevelyn

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    i am so excited for this already.
    and even though you said that it's not what we'd expect; i've given up trying to figure out where you're going, cause no matter what it's going to be a million times better than any of my initial thoughts
    January 29th, 2010 at 02:10am