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I just read this and Chasing Chaos and I am in love.
Update, please? :)

You really need to update this because I love it so.

<3

Okay. Damn.

Well.... I didn't really like Evie too much at the beginning of the chapter, and that dislike steadily grew until the end of the chapter. But, like Anna, I have a respect for Evie for being so honest and straightforward. She's a no bullshit kind of girl. In a way, I think Tom needs that. However, I can also see that Katie is the same way. And I like Katie and Tom more than I like Evie and Tom....Just sayin'. ;)

I'm excited for whatever happens next between Oli and Anna though, if that is to come soon. I think that this is going to be a ltitle more Tom-focused, however. I certainly don't mind, though! :D

I loved it.
Oh my god, that was just... Gwah. You need to update.
Now.

I love how you always keep it interesting. Evie vexes me though, she needs to take it down a notch or two. Her insecurity really came out in this chapter, and yes, Savannah needs Tom, but only in a way that anyone needs a best friend. I loved the hair remark, that was great. I was expecting Oli/Sav drama, but this drama was good too, haha. Gah, love this story to pieces.

Katie would have made a much better girlfriend for my best friend Tom than Evelyn.
-I had been thinking that.

I smiled. “Yeah, I’m happy.”
-finally. ok.

It was a sign of her surprising disapproval.
-lolok bitch

I was quite disappointed by this, as I was very curious about what had just happened.
-haha

I thought about how jealous I was of her non-frizzy hair. Mine would never lay as flat as hers.
-random and I love it

lolokbitch.
&I did notice a couple typos but idr what they were.

What a bitch.

That bitch needs to be punched. Or at least get something disgusting and red thrown at her.
Though, hate to admit it, I can kind of see her point. Not in the whole, Anna is needy blahblahblah way, but in that Tom does do a lot for her. However, that's what happens when you have a best friend. Like, duh, bitch? You never felt friendship?

I'm blabbering, I know, but you know how much I adore this story.

I would have to disagree with Evie. She needs both of them, in different ways. I completely understand. I was in that situation a few months ago. But not anymore. I cannot wait for the next update. I love this story oh so much. :) You're very talented, I'm jealous. Haha.

I really don't like Evie. And I really don't know why Tom likes her. Anyway, good chapter. You're such a good writer, and I get excited every time I see that you updated [:

Actually no, I didn't think it was going to be Oli/Sav drama, I had a feeling it was going to be some shit with Tom..well Eve too..she flipped right out, like she always does. I've never liked her, how could Tom stay with someone like that? I was going to say its because he's scared or something, maybe he really wants it to work, or just wants someone to love...I dont know. All I know is that is was right wicked when Tom finally yelled at Eve, though we didn't really get to hear it, it was still wicked. We all know she had that coming.

This is wear I think of Katie. From the start of this chapter, I was thinking that it'd be cool for her to hook up with Tom...and then they're goes Sav with the same idea, haha! Woo! I think that'd go well. I had a friend just like Tom. He had a girl, and he was afraid of dumping her, he thought he was going to be with her forever. His girl was just like Eve too, kinda sweet, looked kinda innocent, and she was never one of our crew, she was totally off, and she never liked all of us. He finally got out and started going out with this loud girl..I don't know what else to call her, she just was kinda of a bitch, but really cool. He wasn't afraid to fight with this chick, ...I don't know how to explain it, but maybe this is what Tom could be with Katie .. ;)

Sav finally did her first tattoo! No more school ,wooo. That was cool, kinda getting a matching tat with your best bud. Man thats something Eve just doesnt get. Sav needs Oli and Tom for two different reasons. Sure Oli is the one she's in love with and hes her friend, but Tom's like her Best Friend..and she's been through shit with him, and I dont know, its totally different..Eve's BLAHHHHHH!

Oh, and smoking weed while listening to Wu Tang Clan, thats just perfect ;) See man, Katie and Tom just seem perfect man! !

I want sav to be with Tom soooo bad!!

you always keep your stories spicy! i love it. update asap!

pleasePLEASEplease update? <3

JESUS.
Okay, I haven't been in a reading mood at all lately, which is why I unfortunately put off reading this for so long. But hot damn, am I glad that I read it now. :)

The whole nearly-sex-scene deal in the car... the awkwardness had me laughing so hard, I can't even. I love how Oli is supposed to just be smooth and collected at all times, always easy going. And yet, pair him up with Sav, and you've got the couple that really just doesn't seem to have anything sailing smooth for them at all. It was cute though.

And I fear I was even blushing a bit as they came out of the bedroom. Well, of course everyone knew what they were up to. Fools can't hide anything in their relationship, so it seems. Gah. They just make me melt from all the adorableness. Somehow I seem to always get much, much more attached to the couples who could just never get it together, than to the couples who always got it right.
Example: I favor dysfunctional Sav and Oli over functional Sav and what's-his-face (Paul? idk) from the prequel.

Very, very good job bro. :D

I'm so glad you updated :D
keep up the good work!

Oh my gosh... that was great. How I've missed this story. I love how you paced the chapter and didn't have them getting it on at the beginning. I'm a little curious as to what Tom's intentions are now, he was against Oli and Anna in the beginning and now it's almost like he's playing matchmaker. No wonder Anna's confused, heh. I'm pretty stoked for the drama that's coming up.

I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that this was updated! I was sooo excited. This chapter was really great, and I can't wait to read the next update xD

I'm so happy you updated this, I've missed this story so much.
Realllly good chapter by the way, can't wait till the next one. <3

Alright, I'm just as confused as Anna is. What's up with Tom? He was against their relationship in the past, but is trying to get them together now? Oh man, just keep it coming. I missed this.