Over and Done - Comments

This chapter was amazing!!! I can't even say anything else. I agree, I liked when everyone called her out on all the shit shes been saying and stuff. She sounds like she's going to go insane.

My god.
I just caught up, I've missed the last three or four chapters.
I love your writing.
I want to cry.

You write some of the best fanfiction I've ever read here.
Just some of the best stories I've ever read here.

Chasing Chaos was amazing, We're Trouble Bound was amazing, this is amazing, I just...
never stop.

And the intensity builds, but I am loving every word of it. The plot is just so amazing so far, I don't even know what to say about the last two chapters. I was a little stunned about the kiss, but even more stunned by Evie randomly showing uo at Anna's work. I think it's sweet how she wants a real relationship with Oli, and really, why wouldn't she want one? I'm sorry for the late comment, work has been keeping me very busy. I am still with you on this story and loving it so far.

this is getting insanely intense.

woah i didn't see that coming. that was some right drama there. i never liked evie, she messed tom around though to him anna comes first before her, but still, she should respect that they are best friends. she shouldnt have lied to tom but at least tom isnt trapped in the relationship. i have a funny feeling that he has feelings for anna? though im probably wrong though, but i dunno there is something there. but i really want anna and oli to be in a proper relationship, perhaps things for katie and tom will work out? gosh, i really wanna know what happens next, seroiusly. im just aching for it, please update again soon, this is the best story i've ever read! i love it! c:

This chapter completely took things to a new level. It made me think of me and my best friend. I feel like Sav at the moment. I feel like I can do no good to my best friend. He's doing good, and I am the opposite. Anyway, Evie was preggo? Dude, that's wacky. She should've told Tom the moment it happened, but I am glad they're broke up. It's time for Tom and Katie to get together. :) And this whole Sav and no Tom business, I don't like it, not one bit. They're supposed to be together as best friends of course, but still together. I am bittersweet about the next chapter. I know it's going to explode, but I kinda wanna see if it doesn't. Gah! Cliffhangers are the death of me. Love this story always keeps me on the edge of my bed.

Well this was a cheery chapter. I never know what to say to people, especially not when it's something like this. I do not envy her right now. This is going to be hard to get out of.

I was so glad to come back and find two updates I never saw, that was awesome. I love this story, so it just made my shitty day, thanks haha (Y). All this drama is right.. Evie was preggo? Damn.. don't think i saw that coming ..when she said she was pregnant, I thought she meant now , I was so sad, cause then Tom would be stuck with her forever, and not be with Katie!!! And they both think that kiss was nothing? Man it was..and I hope this continue's! Tom and Katie..that would be amazing. Tom wouldn't be stressed out all the time, and actually find love with an awesome person...haha yesh xD Seems all is well with Oli and Sav..they just need to make it offical. And Black Flag patch, woo! haha xD

I feel like acting like a toddler and stomping around while repeating "No!"
I don't want them to get into a fight or split or anything! =[
It's not right: Sav and no Tom. No bueno.
It's like green eggs and ham never being put together to make a great book.
Like... Music with no speakers to play it.
A guitar with no strings.
My iPod with no music.
Just doesn't happen and shouldn't be!!!!!
I'm sad they're not all... Sav and Tom like normal... I am dreading to read the next chapter. I don't want it to explode!
Still live the story to bits and pieces. =] Thinking I want to go read it all again actually. I love it so much! <3 The best Oli story by far. Times ten.

I love this story so much. It's amazing. You're a fabulous writer.

You and that fucking cliffhanger. And me and my involuntary noises....

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it's bothering me that the last comment on the first page has spelled definitely wrong.

i love this story. it depicts my life right now so vividly. i love it.

I am still here. I re-read this story because I needed a fix, haha. I am so happy there is another chapter, cause I want more! Haha. I really dislike Evie. Tom and Katie should be together! They kissed, like aww. And I think Anna and Oli need to talk about their status, they should be boyfriend and girlfriend. :) Can't wait for more! xx

still here!

I am still here! Keep updating! I'm so glad to hear you're back (;

I am still here! Keep updating! I'm so glad to hear you're back (;

i'm so stoked that you updated this! i was thinking about it the other day wondering and now yay, its been update! but you've left it hanging D: you must update again soon! though i haven't updated my story for a long time either, so i have no say haha. gosh, i really want to know what evie is going to say to anna. so many questions and no answers! i want anna and oli to be in a proper relationship, its all a bit of a pickle isnt it? well anyways, this is one of the best stories on mibba, i read the prequel all over again so i could get this one! i hope you update again soon (: this was brill!

I'm very glad that you have a whole other chapter of this because you always leave me with suspense!
I don't like Evie. I know she has her reasons and she's probably going to apologize soon, but she just...bugs me. She reminds me of someone I used to know, I think.

I'm insanely jealous of your writing. It's just so smooth. I'm anxious for another update.

Amazing job.

Ahhh you're back! I am with you too rofl I missed this story. I think she and Oli should be together :O

I absolutely am still with you! Haha
Chasing Chaos was hands down my favorite story ever. You know I even wrote a quote from it on my shoe? You're an amazing writer. I get so happy when you update. I think I've read the prequel about five times now... I love it to say the least!
You know I'm hooked on her name now. I want a baby girl so I can name her that and call her Sav haha I love that nickname a lot for some reason.

This is going to sound stupid since everyone else seems to know and I don't... But I still can't figure out which one she's supposed to be with in the end. This past chapter made me think Tom, but before it always seemed kind of like Oli. It's driving me batty, I won't lie.

Amazing story. Bien fais! =]