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Dayyyyyyyum. This story is beast. I forgot how addictive Oli and Sav's relationship is. It's absolutely awesome. I love this story so much. I cannot wait for the next chapter. DRAMA...is best. haha. But I am really happy with Tom, it's like he's getting Oli and Sav together, it's his way of saying he approves. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. <3

FINALLY...

Another great chapter as always. They're finally normal, except not.

How did this happen? And where did I get this kind of courage? “Maybe you could kiss me?” I seriously said these words. Me. Anna. Savanna. Whatever. Wow.
-haha

“Where the fuck are yeh? I’ve left my ciggies in the car. Yeh got the keys, don’t yeh?”
-I will kill her.

“Well yeh ‘ave.” He lifted his eyebrows in a rather suggestive manner and I couldn’t control the blush burning my cheeks. “Yeh blushin cause o’ me? Again?” Trousers still undone, he stepped into me and kissed my lips briefly. “Yeh fuckin’ cute.” He ran his fingers down my cheek.
-d'awh

“And Oli keeps grabbing his junk like he’s trying to cover up a boner,” Katie added.
-hahahahhahah

Chaos descended quickly and I had to admit that I had very sincerely missed parties like this. Parties where you knew everyone and they knew you, where you were liable to get high fives for no reason, where the music was familiar but new. In this environment, I was almost happy.
-nice

“So can I close this door?” He eyed my bedroom door with a smirk on his face.
-I like the way you're describing the mood in this section. Well captured.

“Well don’t be a bitch. I’m jus tryin to take off yeh clothes—“
-haha

Oli on the other hand was accepting the high fives that were being offered up to him from his friends. Gracie and Katie, we were sitting together, tried to hug me and pet my hair as though I were a child they were very proud of.
-oh ok.

“Nicholls and Oli.” Tom was cracking open two beers and pouring them into the plastic cups aligned on the table.
-they're all together, I like this.

im so glad you updated! i was thinking about this story like an hour before i checked the updates and you updated! that was worth the wait though, your chapters never fail to hook me into this all over again! your writing is amazing and its like a movie playing out in my head. i love this story loads! her and oliver have some heatedness between them indeed, they are meant to be together, but i really hope that it doesnt ruin the friendship between her and tom like last time. i hope you update again sooner! this story is like one of the best oliver stories on mibba! :D i love it!

I really really liked this chapter. I like how you didn't just let them get it on right away, and they had to argue and get held up beforehand. It was so them. And you should post the next chapter really really soon. Because I want to see what this drama is [:

I forgot about this story!

But I'm glad to read the update. Excellent, as usual.

Man am I ever glad you updated! I've been waiting and waiting! I was sad to ever think you were gotta stop. This is my top fav Oliver Sykes story! I lovelovelove it!

They were trying to get it on in Katie's car? haha, I liked how you involved a lot of humor into it. Not just like a usual 'sex' sceen, everyone else does..lol. Then the phone rings! And Gracie comes. Then at the end of the chapter, how they have a little fight, but work it out with kissys, haha. It's nice to have them back together. But how can Tom be so okay with it? I know you most have something big for this sequal. I'm so curious what you have planned for it, cause its only been 3 chapters. Next chapters where the drama begins? Bring it onn!!

Damn, girl. I love this story. I just read the whole thing. You've got me nervous with the whole "this story's not what you're expecting" thing though. And then the whole "we already know who she's meant to be with" and the "you may start cheering for the wrong person" thing. She doesn't end up with Tom, right? Because I think that would just be kind of awkward. It seems like all the really well written stories on here don't have the happy ending you want. So please, just make me happy and have Oli and Sav end up together in the end? It doesn't have to be all happily-ever-after-cheesy-fluffy-shit, just something that'll leave me smiling. Update soon? This story makes me smile.

Oh my goodness... that was mindblowing. I'm catching up on updates and when I saw that you updated, a smile tugged at my lips. Tom cracks me up, he is just one sneaky character. I also love how you wrote Oli's appearance into the chapter... it surprised me. I'm wondering what's going to happen next... Oli definitely knows how to push Anna's buttons, and she seems to just be realizing how much of a hold she has on him. She was right when she thought they could never be "just friends." I am insanely in love with this, and I hope things sort of stay the way they are... but drama is always exciting too.

Damn I haven't been on here in a long ass time, and dude, I've got so many friggen updated stories in my subscriptions it's not even funny, but just so you know, yours was the first I looked for xD And man, you did NOT disappoint! I'm not sure when I'll be on here again in the future, but I'm still in love with your story, so of course I will keep coming back for it! : ) Keep writing loveh.

God.
The prequel was fantastic.
Please update? :)
<3

awww that was a good chapter
even though it took me forever to read it... but it was fantastic
update sooon!

Oh my Jesus.
FOURTEEN PAGES?!
You, are a beast.

First off, I would just like to mention:
the fever, the focus, the reasons that I had to believe you weren't too hard to sell
Definitely love the tattoo reference. But of course I would. :)
OH MAN. Okay, I experienced a small amount of hatred for Tom in this. That sly little fucker. But I guess what he did was right, because I highly doubt that Oliver and Anna would have ended up talking if she hadn't been forced to ride in his car. So, by the end, Tom earned his points back.

So it was mentioned that Oli pushed Anna's buttons just right... well, is it fair for me to say that I think she does her share of pushing his buttons as well? Really, I think they both push each other quite a bit, to the point where it looks like they end up fighting, or they end up kissing. Anna has this insane control over Oliver, but I think she's still realizing just how much power she truly has. Maybe she'll figure it out?
This was such a great chapter. :) My mood is like... through the roof right now.
The only thing I will pray for now, is that things don't go downhill again.

I am very much in love with this story (:

Fuck. I am SO happy you updated this story.

I was kinda surprised when Sav was going to be going to a Bring Me the Horizon concert. I knew right away it was a set-up, that was planned by Tom. When he called and said he wasn't going to be picking him up, it was kinda oddvious that it was going to be Oli. I kinda felt bad that Tom tricked Oli into thinking that Sav wanted to talk to him, when she didn't. But in the end, they sorta did talk about things.
Sav's new ink rules by the way. I'm so glad she took the intership at the shop with James. I was wondering if you were going to make her go or not. It was cute, with Sav and Oli, in the car, when he made her blush.
I gotta say I missed Grace. I think it'd be an awesome thing if her and Katie met. I think it'd be great. And I gtg but I loved the end when Oli kissed her. I love you for updating !!

So I just finished Chasing Chaos and this.

And wow. I'm seriously loving it, and I can't wait for more!

Oh I just love this story, so much :)

love it
<33

I am definitely still in love with this story. Especially this chapter.
I'm so happy that they're talking again. They both needed it. And the kiss...
Gah, I hate cliffhangers. Although I can't even be upset because 14 pages is a ton. So just.... update soon?

:) i love it