Save Me - Comments

Okay, so. now that I have a bit more time - I really enjoyed the details you put into this - Roxy's life really broke my heart! I really liked how Zacky and Brian swooped in for the rescue. As I said, though, I really hope you come back to this eventually.

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I like this! It has an interesting premise, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you come back to this eventually!

Your story is so well written! I love it!

this was a very inspiration for me to read this story

I've never been a fan of Avenged Sevenfold, so I had a hard time reading this to be honest. You provided ample detail, but in some sections it got too be a little much. Although, you do have a great writing style that flows well.

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I read the first few chapters, not because it wasn't good, just because I have no idea about avenged sevenfold. Your writing style is pretty unique and refreshing. Everything flows really well. Keep on writing!

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I love Avenged Sevenfold, so this was really easy for me to get into. I loved it! I loved the grammar and word choice. This sticks in your head. Great job! Your style of writing is very intriguing.

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I'm not that into Avenged Sevenfold, but the story was ok enough for me to actually get into it and spend time learning how the story works.
I also love the writing style and word choice, and the grammar was fantastic! this story will stick into your mind and leave you thinking about it until your head explodes.
Brava!

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I'm not that into Avenged Sevenfold, but the story was ok enough for me to actually get into it and spend time learning how the story works.
I also love the writing style and word choice, and the grammar was fantastic! this story will stick into your mind and leave you thinking about it until your head explodes.
Brava!

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I've never really liked Avenged Sevenfold. I try not to read fanfiction for fandoms I'm in because of the confusion it would cause me, but this story was amazing. The syntax and the grammar you used was exceptional. I love this story a lot and you should most definitely keep up writing :D
10/10

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I was hecka skeptical to read this, because I don't listen to Avenged Sevenfold. So for part of it, I had no idea what the fuck was going on or who or what the characters looked like. But I googled them, listened to a few songs, watched a few videos and now I'm super into them. You're the best for getting me into one of my now favorite bands, and the story was more than likely the best I've ever read about them. I understood everything and just generally thought that it was all out great c: 10 out of 10!! :D

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I will admit that I was very nervous to read this because I do not like Avenged Sevenfold, and I like reading about them even less. BUT. You have an excellent writing style and word choice. And for someone who does not consider themselves a writer, I was very impressed by your fantastic grammar.
Although I can't get into because its just not my thing, I think you're very talented.
Keep up the good work!

okay, this was not good.... it was BAD!!! just kidding!!! this was just so amazing, when I read the first chapter... I was like what's next??!!!! I NEED TO KNOW NOW!!!! AND I KEPT ON READING! I really liked the way you write!!! the words you use.... it is just awesome....I am gonna find more stories by you and read them until I am satisfied... LOVE THIS STORY!!!! AWESOME!!!!

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Well I liked this, actually I loved this! Your writing style is refreshing and hooking throughout. It flows well and is interesting to read, you but a lot of detail in, I like detail. You've forgotten to capitalize some things, and there are a few mistakes, but overall this is well written. Good work!

She's his daughter now........lol can't wait to find out what happens I honestly think this is great! I hope that you want them to be together when he comes back i'm sort of rooting for them!!! I like how you started the story with the sirens and such i was hooked...my thought were ':O there's sirens what's going on' your style of writing is intriguing

She's his daughter now........lol can't wait to find out what happens I honestly think this is great! I hope that you want them to be together when he comes back i'm sort of rooting for them!!! I like how you started the story with the sirens and such i was hooked...my thought were ':O there's sirens what's going on' your style of writing is intriguing

OMG umm already in love with the main character

I really like your story, I find it very easy to read, though my imagination can't, in any way, listen to Zachy speaking in such ways.

I believe is going pretty fast but I can see something more happening. Like when he's back from tour he falls in love with her, she stops seeing him as an older brother and gets a crush on him, a huge conflict with Gena... something like that, maybe a real family member appearing to ruin her life yet again, wanting to take her really far away from Zachy, I don't know, my mind is running wild after reading this.

Hope you update soon.

Is this still an active story