Save Me - Comments

What caught my eye was the title, honestly it was a little generic but by the summary I could already tell it was great. So far I've only read the first chapter and I love how you analyze almost every detail; it vivid it my head. I'm honestly not a big fan of Avenged Sevenfold, and basically I only read bandfic slash stories, therefore I don't read much fanfictions about them, but this is really good.

Update soon, yeah?

The summary was very captivating. You had me intrigued by it. I'm glad that she was taken away from her father, even if she did run away in the end.

As I was reading the first chapter, I couldn't help but notice something: You are not properly capitalizing your Is. They must be capitalized at all times! No exceptions. The single I must always be capitalized, and I hope that you will correct this problem before you get reported.

Gonna update within the next few days. I've finally left high school and I only have 4 exams left from compulsory education so after that I'll have loads of time to update!

please update soon i wanna c wat happens to roxy

Please update this is one of my fave stories so please update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your story, its really good. And I got really excited when I saw you used the word uber. I love love that word! I don't even no if its even a word. Keep up the good work :)

This story is awsome and very well writen by an amazing author and I would love another update as soon a possibel.

UPDATE! Fucking in love with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<33 Up-date again soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! =D

I love it!!!! type more!!!!! :)

amazing! loving the story so far! cant wait for next chapter xx

this was NOT enough for not writing for like, ever!! i DEMAND u write more!!! DO IT!!! or my rainbow bunnies will come and eat ur feet alive!!!! have a nice day :) and remember update, or the bunnies will come... :D

awesomeee can't wait for the next chapter

<3333 Up-date again soon, I love the story and I'm dying to see what's going to happen next!! =D

this is really, really, really good!!! please update it ;D

This is amazing so far. I love it.

i really enjoyed ur fan. fic can't wait for more

Very, Very great story! Update Soon!

keep updating!!! my rainbow bunnies will come and steal all ur left shoes if u dont!!!! so i suggest u update soon if u dont want this to happen!!! oh and u might want to make it sound like their actually talking in present day speech, dumb it down a little, you know. not that it's bad cause it's great, i mean i've even caught my self writing in enhanced speech like that before, but for this story i think you need to dumb it down just a tad... no more "wilts" and big words that confuse people. i'm not trying to say anything bad, so please just take it as constructive criticism and that i'm trying to help this story be as great as it can get. thx. no hard feeling plz. :)

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