thanks for all the comments guys :) but i just need to get this straight.. don't worry i'm not making it some twisted story where a 14 year old gets off with Zacky or anyone, it'll all be fine. xx
really good ....i like :) yeah agree with the two above me it's really weird when the child dates the friend some stories can pull that off good butmost of them don't, hope you planned it another way really looking forward for more hope you update soon :)
really good story just read it to the latest chapter you sometimes make a few mistakes with capital and small letters but other than that it's really good :) *thumbs up* man i feel so bad for roxy how can someone be so sick and twisted to do that to their own child what made him snap that he did it? man Zacky and Brian are such sweethearts especially Zackky in this situation Brian seems kind of awkward when he meets her really looking forward for more hope you update soon :)