One Heart - Comments

I can totally see that being annoying when you have things to do but I'm fully on Brian's side (and not just because he's so so sexy...hehe). Nat shouldn't be pushing herself like she is. It's never good to push yourself that hard. But maybe this means she is getting better....please tell me it means that. I know I practically beg you every comment to tell me she's going to live but I know that you won't give me an answer *sigh* Damn my impatience. :) I hope you had fun in the mosh pits yesterday. Totally sounds like lots of fun. Who'd you go see?

Update soon!

if Chloe knows she sick, why would she let Nat do her wedding?? anyway loving this story, but i dont want her to die! :( update soon :) xoxJess

AWW! This chapter was so cute! I love the Zacky FINALLY proposed to Chloe!! That was just sweet! And then his entire freaking out over the ring...priceless. *sigh* I love them Avenged guys. :) Brent's a little...interesting when drunk. I can see it being funny to a point but then not funny anoymore. Especially when they bring the stories out again. Oh how I hate family stories. lol! My heart goes out for Chloe and Nat cuz Nat's leading her on like she'll be there for Chloe's wedding. Now if this is your way of telling us that she will be then I'm all for it :D But Chloe's right...Nat does have a heart of gold and Brian is the luckiest guy in the world to call her his wife. Can't wait for more! I'm addicted if I haven't told you before! :)

Another amazing chapter! Brent took it better than I thought he would. Now calling Nat a bitch was not nice, but Brian handled that one quite well. :) And Brian is so whipped, but its sweet. Anyone would be too if they were going through what Brian and Nat are. I just knew Rae was gonna get sick. Ugh! But did you have to make Nat catch it too? That is totally not good for her health at all. I just wanna see her get better. Come on, she has to. Pleeeease with a cherry on top *puppy dog face*

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter :) You are forgiven for no update yesterday cuz...well Alice in Wonderland is a great movie. I've seen it already and really liked it. Johnny Depp = amazing :D

wow! amazing!!! update soon

I'm not actually too sure on McKenna's age, I don't believe I ever found anything I could work off to estimate her age in comparison to Brian's.

For the sake of this story though I'll pin her down at 21-22, deviating closer to the former of the two :)

I most certainly did have a fun time on break. I did absolutely no homework which was fabulous :D If only I could do that every week :P Glad the comment made up for it though. I like to be rewarding to those stories I can't live without :)

Now I'm glad that Papa Gates accepted Rae so easily. I think McKenna is right when she says that Brent will be harder to convince of that. I think it shall be very interesting to see Brent's reaction to the news that he is an uncle. :) You're right though...family stories are always the best. They are always entertaining...and embarrassing. haha! Brian and Nat are so cute but I've said that before so that's old news to you. Lastly, Rae better not get sick from whatever Mickey has because that would not be good for Nat. She is highly susceptible to illness with her weakened immune system so you better not be planning on her getting sick. I will be extremely unhappy about that. Update soon! :)

How old is McKenna?

That comment certainly does make up for the missed week- never though I'd be getting one like that ^.^

I hope you had a fun time on holiday, I had to say I am envious of you. I'd have loved to go on holiday there :(

Okay so I know its been awhile since I last updated but being on vacation does that to you. But...I am now all caught up and boy do I have a comment for you :)

Let's start with the happy....I so awwed when Nat and Brian got married. All the butterfly references were just perfect. Seriously I don't know how you do it but you do it amazingly. Chloe was a bit funny too at times. I mean what best friends aren't. They just want you to be happy so they do whatever they can to make that possible. Rae was sweet too when Nat was in the hospital and didn't want to leave. That was cute. But then again when isn't Rae cute? lol!

Now for the not so happy....you seriously had my stomach in knots when she collapsed at her wedding. I was like 'Oh no. Not now. Not after those beautiful vows. Not in their first dance together.' I was more like screaming that in my head while biting my lip as well. Just so you know. haha. I like how protective they all are of her. I mean Chloe being all like 'I'll do whatever to get you back in the hospital' was nice, but not what Nat wants at all. Who wants to be stuck in a hospital afterall.

I almost cried at the sweet sections of these past few chapters. I don't want Nat to die and I hate that her cancer has spread. Brian's magic needs to kick in now. He is helping her by making her happy but I want him to heal her physically as well so that they can live a long happy life together. Please oh please let Nat be fine. I'm good with cancer magically disappearing. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope this comment makes up for the missed week of comments.

so cute! :D Update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I'm glad you like both the stories- I didn't know it would take that long to read both of them- then again, they do both amount to like 60-70 chapters together at the moment, with more on the way :P

Thanks :)

his story is great... i luv it!!!

i jst wish she doesn't die =[

i luv it though!!!

omg, i jst read the whole thing from the start, including the prequel, well it took me a few days lol,
i kno nat is sick nd all but i wish she cud hav some random merical recovery.
update soon pls :D :D :D :D :D such a great story :D

I want more soon!

DON'T LET HER DIE MAKE THE CANCER GO AWAY I LUV HER AND BRIAN AND RAE TOO MUCH!!!!!!!

splendorous chapter! more soon? *gives puppy dog eyes*

Aw!!! YAY!!! XD Finally!!

im excited for more!

Aw, thanks- I'm glad you like it :)