Gold, Guns, Girls - Comments

love this, update soon please

Dammit. Cameron is such a DOUCHE. He only see Olivia as a prize. I just wish he didn't sound like such an attractive douche.

Well, I was going to leave a comment getting on your case about not updating, but I noticed I hadn't commented on that last chapter! I must say, poor Olivia! Cam is going to take complete advantage of her like that. She's gotta speak up! (Though now it's probably too late.) I'm so very curious to see how far things will go before someone like Topher or Liv's brother finds out. I wonder just how people will react, not to mention, how Olivia will change as well. O:

Update again some time, even if it's only one. I miss this story!

oh. my. goodness. I am absolutely itching for an update! Please, for the sake of my sanity, UPDATE! I'm going crazy, this story is amazing!
oh and for the record, team topher ftw. :)

MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i need more of this story!!!!! team Cameron... even if he is a dick ahhaha :)

oh my god, Cameron is such a pig! but I can totally see him and Liv together.
it's really weird; Logan Lerman is my favourite actor of all fuckin' time, and as soon as you introduced Topher to the story, that's who I pictured! when you put the pictures of him on, it made me really happy :)
amazing job, can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my gosh. I can't believe he did that to her at the restaurant!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! But I kinda can too. Gahhhh. He should not be doing that. Loved loved loved the update ;) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

Cameron is a pig. I just want to give him a swift kick in the balls. :(
Poor Olivia is too nice, she doesn't want to believe the worst in people, especially her best friend.
& Topher.. <3

Honestly, i thought Cameron was being a dick, and Olivia should have stood up for herself. But other than that, i realy luv the story.

I love this story. However, I despise Cameron.
I wish he'd get over Olivia so she could be happy with Topher (whom I love).
But, then again, that wouldn't be very eventful, would it?
So, I'll just leave it at this; I hate their 'relationship', but at the same time, I don't think it should stop. Necissarily.
Carry on, despite how confusing that might have been, please :D

Arrggh! evil evil Cameron!
then again.. i blame Olivia aswell, she wants him.
love how you've written this story with numerous POV's per chapter :D
update soon please

Oh man, Olivia is going to get herself in trouble. And that Cameron! He's the perfect poison. Gah, you're making this story horrible! I have to know what will happen once Cameron really starts advancing. Will Olivia finally speak up because of what her brother told her? How will Topher react if/when he finds out? So much to say, so little comment space! Update fast again! I must know! (Plus it's awesome seeing new chapters within a week of the old one xD)

Oh dear lord. That chapter was so intense. I was not expecting that AT ALL. Cameron is such a bad boy and I love it. I feel like they should talk about what happened in the next chapter?!?

i've been reading this story since the begining, and i just want to say i love it. It's completely original, realistic, and I'm in that great place when a reader is reading a book and doesnt know how it's going to end, or what they want to happen, and they are totally consumed and in the exact position as the main characters. It's amazing. really proffessional. also, on the topic of chapter 18, this has totally happened to me. not the double date situation. but with one of my boyfriends. my first one actually. he was using me and i was too niave to really understand what was going on. he dumped me when i told him i wanted to stop. so i guess it was hard to read but i really enjoyed it. again, very well written :).

aahhh Olivia is so conflicted! ...me too! I like the idea of her and Cameron, but I also think she and Topher are cute. baaahhhh.

Okay, so Mibba apparently hates me for not notifying me of your last five updates. Otherwise I would have personally harassed you for setting a height for comments and not updating! Anywho, having no idea whether or not I commented before, let's just start from the very beginning:

Firstly, I love your writing style. I can't really explain why, it's just one of my favorites. Secondly, I think Topher is absolutely adorable. Him and Olivia are *perfect* together. With Cameron, even though he's a dick, I think he's interesting. He will-- no, he already has made this story one of my top three. Gotta love the arrogant perverts, right? (Though, I'll admit I think a big bulk of my love goes to dear Olivia here.) On my last note concerning older chapters, I'm actually very happy that you didn't make Heather a bitch. It's nice to see a cute, outgoing chick opposed to those two-faced whores. Hurrah for Heather!

Currently, I also think Olivia is adorable, even with her little inferiority complex with Heather. Poor girl. Either way, I really look forward to this next update of yours. I have high expectations, not to really put you on a scare or anything! It means so far you're doing awesome enough to make me think you'll do even better. Accept it! So yeah.. I this comment should count as two now that I'm looking over it. Expect more xD

haha this is really great!
This is going to be interesting. What's gonna happen on the date? :)
I really like this story! :D

olivia and tropher are cuuute!
olivia reminds me a little bit of the red head in true blood...
update soon please :D

Love love love the update :) Her and Topher are so precious together :) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

Awsome, awsome and awsome! I love this story and I love Topher! I totally relate to the story except I wish I had a 'Topher' ... great story cant wait for the rest.