Ahhhh. You....like...I don't even know what to say. You know what someone points at you with admiration on their face and says "yooooouuuuuuu" really long. That's what I feel like doing to you. This was simply fantastic. Olivia is stupid (WHY ISN'T SHE HAPPY THAT TOPHER LOOKS AT HER BETTER THAN 'I WANT TO FUCK YOU SO BAD', he looks at her like 'I NEVER WANT TO LET YOU GO.' And personally, If it were me, I'd go for the latter.). Cameron makes me feel uneasy. And Topher in undeniably one of the cutest characters I've ever met. I still don't really have an opinion on Heather. I'll let you know when I form one. Haha. Seriously though, even as a filler, I was captivated until the end. I bet you think I'm a total creeper because I feel like I'm always the one to comment on a new chapter first lately. Gah, I don't even care. You're an amazing writer.
Such an amazing story! I can honestly I've read all of your stories and every single one has me in awe. You're such a great writer and your concepts are simply fabulous!
I have to admit that Topher's pretty sweet, but I'm in love with Cameron's character. & I love, love, loveeee this story of yours! Can't wait to read more (:
The new layout is beautiful. =] Logan Lerman is beautiful. =] That chapter was beautiful. =] Great job, I can't wait for the next update. =] (I hope those are enough smiles...) =]
I am truly in love with your story :] I've always been a firm believer of the Olivia-Cameron pairing but Topher is way too sweet for his own good (and Cameron's for that matter), and he has everything there is to love from a guy. But I really do hope that Cameron isn't really in love with Heather, all though she is a really sweet girl. Cos I still believe that by some complicated twist of fate Cameron and Olivia will end up together :D
I really hope that you update soon, this is definitely one of the top three stories I've ever read. GO TEAM OLIVIRON :D hehehe :P
Each time Topher speaks, I fall in love with him over and over again. And I think I'm in love with you too for choosing Logan Lerman as Topher. Honestly, that just intensifies my love for Topher. <3
I'm so excited to see what Cameron plans to do to deflower Olivia, quite excited. :) Just from what I can conjure up in my mind, I feel like Cameron is going to become an even bigger assface than he already is, and in my opinion, that would not disappoint. :)
Hey, this is a great story you got goin' on here :) it's crazy addictive, and has a lot more emotion than most the stories I've read on mibba. I don't know whether to hate Cameron or root for him, you've somehow gotten me to love him even though he's a total doucher lol can't wait to read what happens next! Hopefully Cameron's evil plot will be thwarted, that loveable little ass-face....keep up the awesome writing! :D
did you change the layout? i really like it :) the story is getting reaally good and i love who you picked for Topher, perfect choice. can't wait for the next chapter!
So, I just found this story and I am seriously in love. This is so sweet and so well-written and I love every second that I read of it :) Topher is so precious, especially when he is with Livy :) And Heather is so sweet to, which I really like. And I especially love Cameron, but his evil plot is making me not like him ;) haha I love this story so much already and I can't wait for an update :) :D:P:):D:P:):D:P
I love how Cameron is in love with Heather and not Olivia. ..At least not right away ;) That kind of.. punches those cliches in the gut, yknow? :) I still can't get enough of Topher. <3 He's the reason why I read this story. JK, not really. I love your story regardless. Keep up the writing! :D
i am so happy that you updated :) this 'filler' was amazing as always. and i love topher so much, but i feel that there just isn't as much chemistry between him and liv as there is olivia and cameron. yet cam is such a douche bag! but no matter what, this story is always amazing :D
I kind of almost DIED when there wasn't an update. So, in hopes of preventing another near-death experience, I'm leaving you this comment to let you know that this story is amazing and I love it. Even though I hate Taylor Swift... I still love it. A lot.
I love everything about this story :p
Except maybe Cameron :/
I also love Topher's character :D