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  • erratic

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    It's adorable how eager they are to spend time with each other. I'd love to hear about Alex's perspective on this excursion with Zack. But alas, he has to go on that double date. Since he isn't very enthusiastic about it, I'm curious to find out how it'll go.
    February 12th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • Le Lion

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    Usually I don't like stories written when the band is in high school but I made an exception when I saw that it was actually a story about Zack for once.

    And let me just say that this story is epically amazing and I love it very much :)

    Update quickly and if you need to bounce ideas off of anyone, I'm your girl :)
    February 12th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    I love it! I love how amazingly you do with the third-person. It's great!
    February 12th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • november rain;

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    Wewt. ^.^
    Alex got away with questions! ::teehee: x]]]
    And Zack's between hating him for being so annoying and loving him for being so nice. Hahahaha.
    Can't wait to see what's next.
    Update soon! ^^
    February 12th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • Tattoo

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    Awww =D
    Alex should of ditched his date and stayed with Zach!
    Thanks for updating <3
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • Alex McKee

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    “Andrew, he’s not going to talk to you unless your name is Alex,” Nick announces as he walks into the kitchen. He smirks at Zack.

    XD
    True.

    Zack, however, isn’t bothered so much by the ridiculous accusation,

    *gasps*
    That is NOT ridiculous!
    It's the plain truth!
    XD

    “So, who’s this Alex person?”

    Zack freezes, his mouth open and his eyes trained on the refrigerator. He thought for sure that Nick’s statement earlier would go unnoticed.


    XD
    Not a chance!

    “This stupid boy who refuses to leave me alone.”

    Zack’s statement immediately sets Andrew off, concern filling his voice as he asks, “Do you mean he’s bothering you? At school? Did you say something to your teachers?”
    “No, no I don’t mean it like that!”

    “Well….then how did you mean it?”


    He means that he's denying his all time love for Alex and keeps calling him a stalker just to add to his slowly disappearing denial.
    :D

    He makes a scene of leaving the room dramatically, stomping up the steps and to his bedroom. Once he’s sitting comfortably on his bed, he grabs his cell phone and calls Alex.

    XD
    You should bring out his dramatic side more often!
    AWE!
    He's actually gonna call Alex!
    ^^

    “Hello?”

    Zack bites his lip at the sound of Alex’s voice over the phone, but he forces himself to speak, “H-hey, Alex? It’s Zack.”

    “Oh, hey. What’s up?”

    “Well I um… I was just calling ‘cause… I sort of need a favor.”

    “Sure, what is it?”

    “I need a ride somewhere…Well, two places, actually. You don’t have to, I was just-”

    “Absolutely. When should I pick you up?”


    XD
    Og coarse Alex wouldn't mind, he gets to see Zacky!
    :D

    Especially when he opens his mouth.

    XD
    I had to laugh at that.

    “You’re coming in?”

    Duh!
    XD
    Why else would he be behind you?
    XD
    That could be taken the wrong way...

    “No, I do,” Zack says immediately, blushing when he realizes just how quickly he responded. “I mean um… It would be nice having a friend.”

    Hehe, awe!
    ^^
    I love it when he blushes!

    “Well… I do want to but… I sort of have a date in a few hours…”

    GRRRRRRRR!

    Alex wanted to hang out with him, not go out on his date with some girl.

    ^^
    That makes me SO HAPPY!
    IM BACK!
    XD
    Missed two updates, again, stupid tests I had to study for, not even a week into second semester, gah!
    I'm growing so attatched to this story!
    I've already annoyed my friends at school for talking about it.
    XD
    Seriously... I have.
    UPDATE SOON LOVEY!
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    awwh. i love this story soo much.
    updates soon?
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:05am
  • xmydecemberx

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    Aww I love these two!! Alex doesn't want to go on the date with a girl because he perfers boys...yeah Zack big shocker there....Update soon please and thank you!
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • xNOMx

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    Im really liking this! Cant wait for more =]
    February 11th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Haha great chapter.
    February 10th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    Awe. I like that Zack goes and calls Alex like right away.
    I loved the update.=D
    February 10th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • Tattoo

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    Awww =]
    Thanks for updating!
    February 10th, 2010 at 07:52pm
  • november rain;

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    Awhh. :3
    I find it so cute how Zack called Alex immediately after. xD
    It was a pretty short update, but it's better than nothing. x]
    Update soon! :]
    February 10th, 2010 at 12:49pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww Zacky-poo and his gym!
    I love how in real life he used to be thin and scrawny and then he discovered....*amazed voice.* The Gym!! *angels singing* hahahah and now he works out constantly! still love him!
    Aww hes gonna call alex! to cute!
    February 10th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • erratic

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    Although I think it would be nice if Alex drove Zack to the gym, I'm not sure if he'd be able to keep his mouth shut if he needed to take him to therapy as well. This could mean that
    A) Alex will inadvertently make Zack uncomfortable, or
    B) Zack will open up about the issue, or
    C) a little bit of both.

    I'm excited to read it whichever way it unfolds.
    February 10th, 2010 at 05:10am
  • Melly Jelly

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    Awww Zacky-poo told him! <3
    Oh my god, they like, need to mack each others faces right effin now.
    The cuteness is unbearable. XD
    Update again soon?
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:24am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awwww their bonding!!
    Alex so likes zack! hahaha
    February 7th, 2010 at 08:08pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    Aww I am really glad I found this!! It is so cute! Update soon please :))))
    February 7th, 2010 at 07:48pm
  • Tattoo

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    Awww =]
    Thanks for updating <3
    February 7th, 2010 at 07:42pm
  • Takamasa Ishihara.

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    This chapter was so cute. :)
    February 7th, 2010 at 05:08pm