Don't Speak in Guarantees - Comments

I love that he mad a pros/cons list with her and went along with her weird little quirk. She's so uptight. You used a condom, calm down, you're not pregnant. Jeesh. She's all workworkwork and no playplayplay. It's very sad. I hope Patrick can be the one to loosen her up a little, since he seems like the laid back, spontaneous type in this one. This story is highly amusing, seriously. And his little dream? Very hot, indeed. More soon! <3

sooo yeah at the beginning of this chapter i was like WHAT IS GOING ON?
but it was a dream. so i stopped freaking out.
and i can't wait for their date =]
<33 loved it!

great update =)

OMG this story just makes me laugh! i love it! I loved the pros and cons list although with an NHL player there would be no cons with me lol

wow three updates in three days. you're on a roll. hope you keep the chapters coming at this. speed! p.s. really great story can't wait to find out what happens next.

Sawyer is alittle up tight. Hopefully Patrick can calm her down.

Can't wait for more. I really like it so far.

Sharpie is such a dude. And thank you for making me laugh! This was really epic. And some hockey players are really stupid so I know where she's coming from :P Can't wait for more :)
Oh and lol at you apologizing for no sexy times in this chapter :P We're not all sex crazed lady! :P

subscribedd! this story is sexyyy haha i love ittt!

haha k i love patrick in this hes just so typical guy! And Sawyer is freaking out about something that I don't blame her but its so funny

Okay, let me tell you this. Patrick being accused of not understanding what she was saying and not being a smart man, amazing. I mean, he has brains, but I understand where she is getting the jock stereotype from because I go to school with a couple of them, they play hockey. I love how Sawyer makes lists, totally something I do, mentally though, can't waste paper that way, that's what you draw doodles and horribly drawn anime characters on. Haha, my longest comment ever on a story. Feel quite special, that and I am hopped up on sour watermelon and swedish berries. MMM, god's gift to me.

Aww, poor Sharpie. She just flipped out on him over nothing. I was seriously laughing while reading this chapter. Nicely done!

I can already tell I'm going to like their relationship.
The banter was hilarious.
And she is so funny with her pros and cons list.
More soon. <3

i love this story!! its so out of character for you AND yet u do a brilliant job of making me laugh!! can u please update soon? as in like today....

i'd accept having sharpie's babies.
haha

“Oh God!” she muttered. “I didn’t even have sex with a smart guy. I slept with a hockey player!”
LOL. Sexy Sharp is smart....now, Hossa is a different story =]

“Well, let me just say that you did not seem to be rusty at all,” Patrick said with a smirk on his face.
And this is why I love him. Sexy Sharp isn't a bad guy to get back in the saddle with either.

“Because he’s one of the most popular members of the Blackhawks, not to mention, he’s the hottest...."
I'm surprised you didn't add "...after Brent Seabrook." in there =]

Well, hello there, sex in the first chapter. Lmao! Sawyer is so uptight. She needs to relax and not dwell on things so much. She just had sex with one of the most attractive men in the city of Chicago. Savor it, girl. I love Camryn. Freaking hilarious. I can't wait to see when Sharpie shows back up in Sawyer's life. More soon! <3

wow!!! she is utterly crazy & hysterical!!
she was very rude and kinda mean insulting his intelligence based only on his profession :(
i love how he smirks about her not being rusty ;p
absolutely cant wait for more! :)

Ha. she cracks me up.
Insulting a poor hockey player.
haha.
Can't wait till the meet again. :)

I'm really liking this story :D
please update soon?!

soo pretty much this chick cracks me up
she seems to have a stick stuck somewhere... ;D
and i can't wait to see how p.sharp pounces next! hah!
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