Impulse - Comments

Damn! This story is so intense.
I wonder how they ended up this way.

This story is really great.
I just cant wait to see where it is going.
I mean if she'll stay, get found out, leave.
Its a really amazing story.
Cant wait for more.

Woman. This is amazing. When I was reading the story for the first time, my nouth just totally dropped open. It's amazing, amazing and amazing. What else can I say? Oh yeah, I lovedddd it!

Aw, that was such a sad chapter. But, you wrote it very well. It's horrible that Brian does that to her. And worse, that she can't seem to get away from him.

Any, I really hope you update soon :D

Lynnie!! You Updated!

Wow, this was an intense chapter. I can understand what you were saying about it being so hard to write.. I think the amount of detail that you have is just amazing, you tell the story so well.

The rape scene was well written and very confronting. You deserve a medal for writing this. You are amazing!

itopity87 What exactly were you saying? This has absolutely nothing to do with what Lynnie wrote. And by all means it is not funny. I think you should seriously think about what you say before you comment this. This is a seroius topic. and not a joke.

Well done Lynnie!
love you.
xx.

epic.

Brian's wife reminds me of Eddie Murphy's RAW. He does this bit where he talks about women wanting HALF of your money and he said he was gunna go to African and meet a women named UmFuFu who rides a Zebra naked.
lmfao

Sounds intense! I can't wait!

I can tell this is going to be a very intense story and I can't wait to see where you take this. You are a brave woman for righting a story based around domestic violence. I applaud you for that strength.

Jesus christ you've done it again.
I love it!
:)

Excellent first chapter. Your descriptions are lovely. And, I don't mean what you're describing because any type of sign of abuse is horrible. But, the way you describe it. You really make the reader visual it. Wonderful job.

Hope you update soon!

*Subscribes*

OMFG!!!!!!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can understand that she stays around for that small tender side of Syn.

Well Done Lynn!!

Love You!!
x.x.x.