wow. that was a hard chapter to stomach. It is so sad because she loves him so much but she has to love herself enough to get away from the abuse. Just when I thought she had finally had enough, that he has taken it too far and that she was going to run to the safety of her friends and family, he pulls her back in with three little words.
He hasn't changed though. He hasn't tried, and there is a reason he is acting like this and until he gets therapy or some shit, nothing is going to change and he is going to keep abusing her. I feel for her and her struggle in loving her husband but she has to help herself before she can help him. One of these days he could kill her.
I really enjoyed the update, not the content (because who likes abuse) but the way you wrote it.
Wow, this is really... it's heart breaking, you know? And, the fact that this is a real life situation just makes it worse. But, you've done an amazing job so far.
This really is a great story. I love how you havent really rushed it. The constant struggle she feels really makes the whole thing feel real. Can't wait for an update.
Oh my God, I can actually feel Emma's fear. You are such a good writer, I wish I could make my readers feel how my characters feel like you can. Please update soon, I am extremely looking forward to the next chapter.
I really want to know what is about to happend. I mean come on the dad can't just sit there and let this happen but then again Brian is not happy at all. Can't wait for an update!
I think that he father is going to come to the rescue or something, he knows what is going on and I doubt that he is going to sit by and watch his little girl get beat.
Can't wait for more. I know what you are trying to do with this story but I really hope that she comes to her senses and helps herself soon, or someone else does it for her. It is so hard to see her in this situation and not able to do anything.
amazing update though. I love your descriptions, I feel like i'm there. :D
This story maks me incredibly sad, which is a good thing because I get the message of it. She was so happy to see her parents too and then Brian takes her away. That really got me. I'm really worried about Emma and what Brian's going to do.
You Wrote This So Well. I Knew That Meeting Up With Her Parents Was Going To Be A Bit Of A Bummer, And I Knew That He Was Going To Notice Her Bruises..
Amazing Update, I Award You For Writing This, I Know It Is Difficult..
This is so good! It kind of reminds me of my Billie Joe Armstrong story 'Out For Blood'. But this...this story is a hundred times better. You are so descriptive of everything, it really adds to the situations. Pleas update soon!
He hasn't changed though. He hasn't tried, and there is a reason he is acting like this and until he gets therapy or some shit, nothing is going to change and he is going to keep abusing her. I feel for her and her struggle in loving her husband but she has to help herself before she can help him. One of these days he could kill her.
I really enjoyed the update, not the content (because who likes abuse) but the way you wrote it.