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  • moviemaniac888

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    wow. that was a hard chapter to stomach. It is so sad because she loves him so much but she has to love herself enough to get away from the abuse. Just when I thought she had finally had enough, that he has taken it too far and that she was going to run to the safety of her friends and family, he pulls her back in with three little words.

    He hasn't changed though. He hasn't tried, and there is a reason he is acting like this and until he gets therapy or some shit, nothing is going to change and he is going to keep abusing her. I feel for her and her struggle in loving her husband but she has to help herself before she can help him. One of these days he could kill her.

    I really enjoyed the update, not the content (because who likes abuse) but the way you wrote it.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • VampAngel77

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    Wow, this is really... it's heart breaking, you know? And, the fact that this is a real life situation just makes it worse. But, you've done an amazing job so far.

    Keep up the good work!
    February 23rd, 2010 at 10:38pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    0.0 brian is a asshole! ugh and she was almost out the door too!

    i really love this story and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and more to come :)
    February 23rd, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • SynfullySweet

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    Wow, I just found this and it's so intense.
    I love it.
    I can't wait to find out what makes Brian such a sick asshole.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • syncerelymikayla

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    Yay xD
    This story is one of my favorites by far!
    I loved the update.
    Brian is an absolutely dick.
    I think he has split personalities! xD Am I right?
    February 23rd, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • the0end

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    This really is a great story. I love how you havent really rushed it. The constant struggle she feels really makes the whole thing feel real. Can't wait for an update.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • IvySaint

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    wow,even though it would've been hard,she still should've left,like they say,guys say one thing and mean another,but anyway,I can't wait for more!
    February 23rd, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • dinugget

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    GAH GAH GAH
    MORE MORE MORE
    BRIAN IS A BASTARD!
    FUCKER!
    February 23rd, 2010 at 02:47pm
  • fireflies

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    This story is amazing already.
    Defiantly my favorite story on Mibba right now.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 04:39am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    I really really love this story :D

    more soon!!!!!!
    February 22nd, 2010 at 05:08am
  • K. Shadows

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    Oh my God, I can actually feel Emma's fear. You are such a good writer, I wish I could make my readers feel how my characters feel like you can. Please update soon, I am extremely looking forward to the next chapter.
    February 21st, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • We Were Young;

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    I really want to know what is about to happend. I mean come on the dad can't just sit there and let this happen but then again Brian is not happy at all. Can't wait for an update!
    February 21st, 2010 at 04:36am
  • moviemaniac888

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    I think that he father is going to come to the rescue or something, he knows what is going on and I doubt that he is going to sit by and watch his little girl get beat.

    Can't wait for more. I know what you are trying to do with this story but I really hope that she comes to her senses and helps herself soon, or someone else does it for her. It is so hard to see her in this situation and not able to do anything.

    amazing update though. I love your descriptions, I feel like i'm there. :D
    February 20th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • syncerelymikayla

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    I absolutely frickin' love this story.
    Brian is such a dick in this!
    Haha, great job!
    February 20th, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • VampAngel77

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    This story maks me incredibly sad, which is a good thing because I get the message of it. She was so happy to see her parents too and then Brian takes her away. That really got me. I'm really worried about Emma and what Brian's going to do.

    Please continue!
    February 20th, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • sTeLLaRxFRESH

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    I knew meeting her parents wasn't a good idea
    But I'm really scared for her.
    Amazing update.
    February 20th, 2010 at 02:40pm
  • dinugget

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    Oh hot damn! I love this story,
    Brian is so fucking mean
    February 20th, 2010 at 11:45am
  • Clik

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    Love To YOU!!!!

    You Wrote This So Well. I Knew That Meeting Up With Her Parents Was Going To Be A Bit Of A Bummer, And I Knew That He Was Going To Notice Her Bruises..

    Amazing Update, I Award You For Writing This, I Know It Is Difficult..

    BTW....... DOLF FTW!!!
    February 20th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • Acid_Rain.

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    Love! Love! Love
    the story<3
    February 18th, 2010 at 05:32am
  • K. Shadows

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    This is so good! It kind of reminds me of my Billie Joe Armstrong story 'Out For Blood'. But this...this story is a hundred times better. You are so descriptive of everything, it really adds to the situations.
    Pleas update soon!
    February 17th, 2010 at 01:13am