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  • VampAngel77

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    Oh, that's horrible that Brian did that to their child too. I'm slowly losing sympathy for his 'problem'. Still, I hope everything goes well when Amelia comes to stay with them. Brian seems to be a little nicer. I hope that holds up.

    Great chapter! Update soon!!
    March 1st, 2010 at 09:19pm
  • Shadows Harlot

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    I had a boyfriend with IED. It's an "Impulse" Disorder that sparks rage out of nowhere. Sounds like what he has, that's my guess.
    March 1st, 2010 at 06:14pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    that was so touching, dear. I've seen domestic violence live and I know exactly how hard it is...
    March 1st, 2010 at 05:10pm
  • dinugget

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    GAH OMG :D
    Took so long?
    Yeah fucking right, girl!

    I love how you update constantly :D:D:D
    March 1st, 2010 at 04:39pm
  • Clik

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    That was a good update, Im glad to see Matt taking a step into the story!
    I know what Brian has, but Im not going to say anything! :]

    It was good to have a chapter where Brian isn't going all insane..

    "Daddy" Thats a twist.

    Love you Lynnie!
    xoxoxo
    February 27th, 2010 at 02:10pm
  • SynfullySweet

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    He's got a kid?!
    Idk what's gonna happen but I'm super excited to find out XD the suspense is killing me, I'm dying to know why he's a psycho!
    February 27th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • dinugget

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    :(:(:(
    February 27th, 2010 at 06:40am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    hmmm i think bipolar, hes waked up, has many regrets that cause him to be bipolar or hes just crazy!

    and daddy?!! i am confused but really excited to read what you have planned for this story, I really really enjoy reading it!
    February 27th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • better.than.sex

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    Brian's problem...is that he's pyschotic!! what
    the fuck is his problem! Great update! But.....
    "daddy"???? oh shit! i can smell the drama.
    more soon!!!!
    February 27th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • syncerelymikayla

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    THEE Best story ever!
    No doubt about it :)
    February 27th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • We Were Young;

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    I really like that you're showing us more about Brian.
    I'm thinking his problem is either he regrets somthing horribly, he likes seeing her hurt, or he's on drugs.
    I don't know, just some thoughts. :/
    Anyway. I can't wait to know how bad this is going to get before some light shines.
    Oh and "Daddy"?
    What do you have planed? haha.
    February 26th, 2010 at 10:10pm
  • IvySaint

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    ok,whats going on now,why did the person say daddy to Brian on his cell?......
    February 26th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • fireflies

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    I can't get enough of this story.
    Keep up the good work girl : )
    February 26th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • grayson;

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    wow!
    this is amazing.

    I just wish Emma would leave him,
    god!
    she deserves way much better.
    February 26th, 2010 at 05:09pm
  • VampAngel77

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    Okay so I have a few things to say actually:
    1. You go Matt! I'm glad he's trying to help her
    2. It's interesting seeing into Brian's mind, you know. I mean kind of getting a glimpse of why he does it.
    3. I MUST know what his problem is!
    4. What do you mean in the AU when you said it's not going to get better yet!?!?
    5. Brian has a kid????

    Please update!
    February 26th, 2010 at 04:44pm
  • K. Shadows

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    Who cares if he said he loved her?! Actions speak louder than words! He's saying he loves her, but he's showing that he loves the satisfaction and power she makes him feel.

    I literally gasped when he started burning her arm. Like my hand flew to my mouth. I was shocked.

    You are such a magnificent writer, I'm so jealous of yourskills skittles :) skittles have more meaning than skills XD

    Please update as soon as you can!
    February 25th, 2010 at 12:31pm
  • Clik

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    Damn You Womann!!!
    You Made Me Cry!!

    This Was Hard I Can Tell.. You Did Such A Good Job On This.. Well Done..

    I Can Still Believe That He Loves Her, It Comes Out Every Now And Then.. And I Like It..

    Love You Lynnie!!
    X.O.X.O.X.O.
    February 24th, 2010 at 09:32am
  • Acid_Rain.

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    Wow! you make me want to smack Brian
    and shake some sense into Emma!!
    How can she take back that tattooed,muscular,spiky hair.......where was I again?xD
    February 24th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • We Were Young;

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    Soooooo Close To leaving!
    Man, She just needed to go.
    I have no idea what is going to happen.
    More soon, please?
    February 24th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • better.than.sex

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    okayy that was complete bullshit! she can't just take him back like
    that?!?! he just gave her like second degree VOLUNTARY burns...
    i mean really?! is that all it takes? and i love you??? ughh! i wanna
    jump in this story and slap some sense into her. i mean, i know it's
    brian and all...but you just don't take that kind of abuse and forgive
    with an "i love you"......

    sorry if that all sounded a little aggressive. haha. this is an amazing story! and in only like five chapters i am so hooked. hopefully i'm wrong and Brian turns out to be the sweetheart us girls all love :) more soon!
    February 24th, 2010 at 01:15am